Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
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DarthPineapple
Zepher
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Alpha
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Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
Story: Viper and his squad have bene captured, and now they are set to be executed. Will they survive their encounter? And why is a CIS scientist like Alpha working with the terrorists?
"Sir, we have captured the intruders," CCD 45 informs. "Good," remarks Alpha. "Grr..." Viper grunts as he is pulled foward.
"Well if it isn't Viper." Aaron remarks. "You remember the last time we m-" "Don't remind me.." Viper interupts. Aaron was once a scientist working for the Republic, but suddenly he defected. Viper was in his lab on Kamino when Aaron suddenly turned and shot Viper in the head. It didn't kill him, but it gave him a nasty scar. "This is a mistake, you're surrounded by our forces. We have blocked every entrance." "Well right now, apparently you're surrounded by our forces." remarks Aaron.
"And also right now, you're all about to die. Good-bye old friend." Aaron sneers.
Aaron raises his blaster pistol, and reloads it. He aims and...
TZZZT! Comes a whirling lightsaber out of the blue. Arth appears on the scene and decapitates 2 Battle Droids and Aaron's hand in one swift stroke. "AHH!" Aaron yelps. "You again! It's time for you to be silenced for the last time!" Alpha screams in outrage, after what Arth did to his lab on Oxun.
Right as Alpha shoots Arth, Viper picks up a fallen Battle Droid's blaster and blasts Alpha in the chest. "Ahh!" he screams. Arth deflects the shot into a control panel, which causes the lights to go out. "Switch on your floodlights!" Viper commands.
The other troopers pick up the Blaster Rifles left on the floor. However, one trooper forgets about the terrorist behind him. Jack raises his gun and shoots.
Right after, another trooper swiftly delivers a blaster bolt to the head. Jack dies instantly.
Aaron then faints. "Viper, we need a Medical Capsule. He'll have to get a mechanical hand," Arth says. Arth gulps after he says mechanical hand as he just got one, after having his hand sliced off by his former master. "Yes commander." Viper replies.
Viper contacts command for a MSC, while Arth checks Aaron's pulse to make sure he is still alive.
A trooper quickly arrives with the MSC. "Hurry, get him on! We need to hurry! The terrorists have set detonators off around the perimeter of this base!" "Got it, trooper. Prepare to attach tubes to neck and arm." Viper commands.
As Aaron is put onto the stretcher, Arth begins to walk towards checkpoint 102, where they will get picked up by a modified ROS.
It turns out Alpha survives the shot. He quickly remembers in the event of an emergency, they would blow up the base. Realizing he has few minutes to get out, he starts crawling to get to the main control panel, where he will attempt to shut down the detonators.
Hope you enjoy! And Aaron dies after he is infected.
"Sir, we have captured the intruders," CCD 45 informs. "Good," remarks Alpha. "Grr..." Viper grunts as he is pulled foward.
"Well if it isn't Viper." Aaron remarks. "You remember the last time we m-" "Don't remind me.." Viper interupts. Aaron was once a scientist working for the Republic, but suddenly he defected. Viper was in his lab on Kamino when Aaron suddenly turned and shot Viper in the head. It didn't kill him, but it gave him a nasty scar. "This is a mistake, you're surrounded by our forces. We have blocked every entrance." "Well right now, apparently you're surrounded by our forces." remarks Aaron.
"And also right now, you're all about to die. Good-bye old friend." Aaron sneers.
Aaron raises his blaster pistol, and reloads it. He aims and...
TZZZT! Comes a whirling lightsaber out of the blue. Arth appears on the scene and decapitates 2 Battle Droids and Aaron's hand in one swift stroke. "AHH!" Aaron yelps. "You again! It's time for you to be silenced for the last time!" Alpha screams in outrage, after what Arth did to his lab on Oxun.
Right as Alpha shoots Arth, Viper picks up a fallen Battle Droid's blaster and blasts Alpha in the chest. "Ahh!" he screams. Arth deflects the shot into a control panel, which causes the lights to go out. "Switch on your floodlights!" Viper commands.
The other troopers pick up the Blaster Rifles left on the floor. However, one trooper forgets about the terrorist behind him. Jack raises his gun and shoots.
Right after, another trooper swiftly delivers a blaster bolt to the head. Jack dies instantly.
Aaron then faints. "Viper, we need a Medical Capsule. He'll have to get a mechanical hand," Arth says. Arth gulps after he says mechanical hand as he just got one, after having his hand sliced off by his former master. "Yes commander." Viper replies.
Viper contacts command for a MSC, while Arth checks Aaron's pulse to make sure he is still alive.
A trooper quickly arrives with the MSC. "Hurry, get him on! We need to hurry! The terrorists have set detonators off around the perimeter of this base!" "Got it, trooper. Prepare to attach tubes to neck and arm." Viper commands.
As Aaron is put onto the stretcher, Arth begins to walk towards checkpoint 102, where they will get picked up by a modified ROS.
It turns out Alpha survives the shot. He quickly remembers in the event of an emergency, they would blow up the base. Realizing he has few minutes to get out, he starts crawling to get to the main control panel, where he will attempt to shut down the detonators.
Hope you enjoy! And Aaron dies after he is infected.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
I like the story, but the room seems too small for all the figs!
major reviss- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Location : Hicktown, USA(KANSAS)
Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
I like the size, one of your best. Would you mind doing something like I did with my battles, in order of appearance?
https://cabg.forumotion.com/members-legion-threads-f15/the-313th-legion-t125.htm
Under battles! If you could that, would be awesome. I would love to go back and re-read them all in order. I think it's wierd that you named a evil character after yourself.
https://cabg.forumotion.com/members-legion-threads-f15/the-313th-legion-t125.htm
Under battles! If you could that, would be awesome. I would love to go back and re-read them all in order. I think it's wierd that you named a evil character after yourself.
Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
Zepher wrote:I like the size, one of your best. Would you mind doing something like I did with my battles, in order of appearance?
https://cabg.forumotion.com/members-legion-threads-f15/the-313th-legion-t125.htm
Under battles! If you could that, would be awesome. I would love to go back and re-read them all in order. I think it's wierd that you named a evil character after yourself.
Actually I did do that, just I got lazy and skipped Oxun and Quath. However, I have did it though, in the title ranks. Stand by.
Sorry for double post, but I have a list here.
Jungle Assault
Wrapping Up
Tatooine Assault
A Sandy Welcome
Breaking the Silence
Arrival at Last
Machines Making Machines
Oxun Assault
Project Alpha
Darkness
Recon
Narrow Escape
Master vs Master
Quath Assault
Terrorism
Terrorism Part ll
Thar Assault
Enraged
Attack of the Clones
Lab Infiltration
Intruder Alert
Order 66
Last of the Jedi
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
That's a very long list! May I suggest taking a bit more time for your MOC's, everything is just a baseplate with some bricks on.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
I love it! I like how we get to learn a bit more about Vipers past!
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
DarthPineapple wrote:That's a very long list! May I suggest taking a bit more time for your MOC's, everything is just a baseplate with some bricks on.
I ran out of SNOT bricks, I should have skipped SNOTTING the hallway. I think all the detail is there.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
Very good! The story amazed me!
Comrade Faie- Guild Member
- Age : 28
Location : Viva La France and Rick Alstley
Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
Storyline=epic win. The captured soldiers was a brilliant idea, as well as the traitor. I like how you incorporated the floodlights and medical capsul into this moc. Let's hunt down and kill all those terrorists in the Clone Wars!
Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
I like the traitor idea, and captured clones fantastic. It was awesome and the story board was great.
thunder-clone- Non-Guild Member
- Location : kalee
Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
thunder-clone wrote:I like the traitor idea, and captured clones fantastic. It was awesome and the story board was great.
PLEASE stop bumping old topics! Don't you care about what people say when they shout "STOP BUMPING!"?
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll
Aki-kundu wrote:thunder-clone wrote:I like the traitor idea, and captured clones fantastic. It was awesome and the story board was great.
PLEASE stop bumping old topics! Don't you care about what people say when they shout "STOP BUMPING!"?
He's so pathetic, isn't he?
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
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