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Thar Assualt-Intruder Alert!

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Post by Alpha Thu Aug 14, 2008 2:40 am

Story: After landing in a safe area somewhere on the planet's surface, the 704th Legion sets up a base camp using a Convertable ROS. Viper gives a briefing to all senior troops about the planet's current status. Suddenly, the radar picks up a signal. Could it be Battle Droids, or something worse?

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"So, we are currently in the J-Section of Thar. Intel has picked up signals of aggressive beasts, but that is of no concern to me." Viper says. "Also," Arth adds, "I sense that Droids have landed on the planets surface near us. We should be cautious." "Anyways, while in the Lab, we found a Crystal. Protecting this Crystal is our top priority, as it could be just more than a regular old crystal," Viper says.

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"And here it is," says Viper as he pulls out the Crystal.

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"I think theres more to it," Arth says. It looks like a Power Crystal of some sort." "Sir, why don't we analyze it now?" asks a Seargeant. "Very well, lets go. Briefing is over."

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"So, 346, what happened to your armour?" asks 142. "Ah, well it-" Beep-beep-beep! "Huh, the radar has detected something!"

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"It looks like Droids," 346 remarks. "Ill clear it up." "Damn, they're not just Droids, they're Spiders!"

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"Commander! Commander!" 142 yells. "We've spotted something on the radar!" "What is it?"

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"We've spotted a fleet of Homing Spider Droids!" "You're kidding me. They've already found us?!?!" Viper exclaims. "Alright , put on your equipment and lets go get 'em! "Yessir!"

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"Well sir, lets go." "Got it. I'm just sensing something wrong about this. Something very wrong.."

Sorry for the lack of story/action/whatever you like. And this is my new version of a ROS.
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Post by Commander N09 Thu Aug 14, 2008 2:50 am

Excellent! I love it. Especially the way how you chose to show off your new troop carrier. But one question: What are those little container things with those little ballish things on it?
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Post by Alpha Thu Aug 14, 2008 2:59 am

I took them out of the AT-TE and stuck then on 2 Slopes. I use them as energy containers.
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Post by legorevolution Thu Aug 14, 2008 5:00 am

Nice story again. I like how this whole chain of events is getting build up! Can't wait for more Smile
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Post by Sialboats Thu Aug 14, 2008 11:01 am

I've always liked your comic strips, Alpha Smile ! 'tis a good story.
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Post by Rook Thu Aug 14, 2008 2:27 pm

Hey have you shown us the ship on the back right?
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Post by legorevolution Thu Aug 14, 2008 3:33 pm

Rook wrote:Hey have you shown us the ship on the back right?

I don't think he has yet. Good observation Surprised
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Post by Comrade Faie Thu Aug 14, 2008 3:57 pm

Good job, I like the story. While it is not action packed that's okay. I really like your MOC's. Fordo Yo!
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Post by Alpha Thu Aug 14, 2008 4:22 pm

Oh the back right is the T-31 Assault "Tank".
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