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Thar Assault-Last of the Jedi

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Thar Assault-Last of the Jedi

Post by Alpha on Thu Aug 14, 2008 7:03 pm

Story: After Arth got executed, Viper sent a transmission to Regimental Commander Brov to execute Order 66. Will Brov be able to kill Keya? Or will he underestimate the Jedi?


Bam-bam-bam! Bam-bam! Tzz-zzzz-zztztzz!


BOOOM! "Ahh!" Bam-bam-bam!


Ching-kaching! "Brov this is Viper. Do you copy?"


"Yes Commander," says Brov as he reaches to his Clone Comlink. "Execute Order 66. Dont underestimate the Jedi." "Yessir!"


"Alright troopers, the time has come. Execute Order 66." Follow me up to the top," Brov commands. "Yessir!"


"Come on, move it!" Bam-bam-bam! BOOM!


"Time to die, Jedi," Brov sneers. Bam-bam!


"You underestimate me, Commander," Keya says as she Force Pushes Brov, deflects a blaster bolt that kills a nearby trooper, and uses the Force to topple another trooper. "Ahh!!!" screams Brov. "


Keya leaps up to the gunner and stabs him in the chest. "AHHH!!!" he screams.


Keya then leaps to the back of the AT-TE. "T4, do you copy?" says Keya over her comlink. "Beep-bop-bweeep!" Bring Arth's ship to AT-TE 324! What happened to Arth?" "Beep-bwoop..." T4 says sadly. "No... it can't be.. Ok, you're coming into view! Prepare to open the cockpit!"


Keya does a force-jump to land on the Jedi Starfighter. She deflects a couple blaster bolts from nearby troopers.


"Ok T4, open the cockpit!" "Bweep-bop-bweeeep!


"Lets get the hell outta here before we get attacked by fighters!"

Sorry for the lack of a baseplate, it was way too big. This is the last of Thar, I will go back to working on Tatooine.


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Re: Thar Assault-Last of the Jedi

Post by Rook on Thu Aug 14, 2008 7:05 pm

Hey no problem. When in doubt use the empty floor. I always hate seeing the half made bed and dirty clothes pile. Razz

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Re: Thar Assault-Last of the Jedi

Post by LegoBoyRobert on Thu Aug 14, 2008 7:06 pm

That is sooo awesome I love it! Blue Arc

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Re: Thar Assault-Last of the Jedi

Post by legorevolution on Thu Aug 14, 2008 7:07 pm

Your progress is good. This is the best story yet I've seen from you Alpha. I like the force pushes/stabbing of the clones. It was good you included the AT-TE in this. My favorite though was how you had the droid bring the ship to him, and how he forced jumped too it. It was a nice touch even without a baseplate Wink
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Re: Thar Assault-Last of the Jedi

Post by Comrade Faie on Thu Aug 14, 2008 7:09 pm

Yeah I hate that I only have green baseplates so I have to make grey ones. Nice little story, my MOC that I'm making is similar to this one. Fordo Yo!

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Re: Thar Assault-Last of the Jedi

Post by major reviss on Tue Aug 19, 2008 2:25 am

I think I missed something but how did Arth die?
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Re: Thar Assault-Last of the Jedi

Post by astoriabluelegos on Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:54 am

major reviss wrote:I think I missed something but how did Arth die?

It's in a previous story. Wink I liked this, even without a baseplate. I especially like that Eta-2, great work! Smile Blue Arc
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Re: Thar Assault-Last of the Jedi

Post by DarthPineapple on Tue Aug 19, 2008 8:59 am

great work, I lo9ve the positioning of the figs on the AT-TE and the grey Eta-2. Smile
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