Naboo invasion!
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Comrade Faie
Rook
major reviss
Sialboats
Axel
Alpha
legorevolution
astoriabluelegos
DarthPineapple
-Aki-
CAPTAINREX
commander crusher
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Naboo invasion!
The droids attack the planet of Naboo for a second time. The 54th strike legion with Jedi Anakin Skywalker. Because of the clone defense the droids were repelled off the planet.
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This is my first moc so I would like to hear positive comments.
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This is my first moc so I would like to hear positive comments.
Last edited by commander crusher on Fri Aug 29, 2008 12:07 am; edited 2 times in total
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Nice. But it needs more scenery. Try adding some buildings. And why are the rocks multicoloured?
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Nice, multicolored rocks. What suprises me is that your commander looks almost EXACTLY like Anakan, and his name looks almost the same aswell!
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
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Those aren't rocks it was part of a building and I must have spelled Anakan wrong I will fix it. Anakan isn't the real commander of the legion he just went to help out.
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Looks cool, Anakin is spelled with an "I" instead of an "A". The battle looks great, lots of action and th jetpack is cool. The scenery needs work however, try to stay to 1 color, or colors that compliment each other, also add some plants in there.
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 34
Location : Oregon
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It's a pretty decent first moc Crusher. The battle action is good and you've seemed to capture that pretty well. I think you need to stick with either phase I or phase II troopers in a battle though because both combined can be confusing. Also the colorful pieces in the battle are a little random. Next time put in vegetation or buildings that will match the surrounding area.
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legorevolution wrote:It's a pretty decent first moc Crusher. The battle action is good and you've seemed to capture that pretty well. I think you need to stick with either phase I or phase II troopers in a battle though because both combined can be confusing. Also the colorful pieces in the battle are a little random. Next time put in vegetation or buildings that will match the surrounding area.
But, if you have a LOT of troopers (look at ACPins Kashyyyk), it'll be hard to tell. On to the MOC, lay of the multicolored bricks! I know you might not have many of the same color, but do you think Clone Troopers saw rainbow mountains? "Sir look! A multicolored mountain!" Um... I'm wrong. Anyways, since this is one of your first MOCs, I wont go to hard on ya. Good job!
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Thanks guys for the feed back, I used both versions because I never saw a version 2 ark trooper.
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commander crusher wrote:Thanks guys for the feed back, I used both versions because I never saw a version 2 ARC trooper.
Sure, think Fordo, or Bly, among many others.
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 34
Location : Oregon
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legorevolution wrote:It's a pretty decent first moc Crusher.
No, legorev, just no. It's not a decent first MOC. Look at it, green floor, multicoloured buildings. I'm not even sure if it's insde some Naboo city or out in the open.
Axel- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Australia
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I'm going to lay into you on the mixing of Phases and rocks. Please, keep em segregated, and the you just gotta use complementary colors. Even for a first, I can't let that Deadly Sin of Legos slide...
If you're a SW Nerd like me, you'll correct me.
But Phase II ARCs looked a helluva lot like the commanders. Higher ranking clones started to adopt Kamas and Pauldrons, so the distinctive markings of the Advanced Recon Commandos became more common. Which was a good thing, I guess, because then they could go about their work without drawing much attention.
commander crusher wrote:Thanks guys for the feed back, I used both versions because I never saw aversionPhase 2 ARC trooper.
If you're a SW Nerd like me, you'll correct me.
But Phase II ARCs looked a helluva lot like the commanders. Higher ranking clones started to adopt Kamas and Pauldrons, so the distinctive markings of the Advanced Recon Commandos became more common. Which was a good thing, I guess, because then they could go about their work without drawing much attention.
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Axel wrote:legorevolution wrote:It's a pretty decent first moc Crusher.
No, legorev, just no. It's not a decent first MOC. Look at it, green floor, multicoloured buildings. I'm not even sure if it's insde some Naboo city or out in the open.
I'm afraid I have to agree.
Out of my first ones, this was the weakest:
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Agree as much as you want; but I'm afraid I'll have to warn you, Sialboats, about double posting. Use the edit button.
Axel- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Australia
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I love the rainbow rubble!!!
major reviss- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Location : Hicktown, USA(KANSAS)
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Wow. That was pretty lame. Sorry. Take some time and build something. The troop carrier I built took about 15-20 hrs. I would hope that you take at least an hour to build your next MOC.
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Well, I took apart my A6 Juggernaught, and it provides plenty of pieces. And like all the others said, avoid the multicolored bricks. It makes the MOC look bad.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
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I just looked closer, for some strange reason, and noticed all the clones shooting lightsabers? "Ok youngling, time to start minding your Master's words."
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astoriabluelegos wrote:Looks cool, Anakin is spelled with an "I" instead of an "A". The battle looks great, lots of action and th jetpack is cool. The scenery needs work however, try to stay to 1 color, or colors that compliment each other, also add some plants in there.
Dang, spelled a correction on a spelling error wrong, how stupid am I! 'oh:
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
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This was my first MOC. Well maybe not. Anyways just stick to using same colored bricks, and you'll be fine.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
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The only complaint I have is the multi-colored stuff, other than that it is pretty good.
Comrade Faie- Guild Member
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Location : Viva La France and Rick Alstley
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Sialboats wrote:
If you're a SW Nerd like me, you'll correct me.
But Phase II ARCs looked a helluva lot like the commanders. Higher ranking clones started to adopt Kamas and Pauldrons, so the distinctive markings of the Advanced Recon Commandos became more common. Which was a good thing, I guess, because then they could go about their work without drawing much attention.
You called? The reason ARCs look a lot like comanders is because, except for Fordo, the Only Phase II ARCs we see ARE commanders. Phase II ARCs actually look slightly different as they lack Legion coloration. The picture you posted above is of Deviss, who is NOT an ARC. There are only two ARCs you see in EP. III and they are Bly and Neyo. Both are not true ARCs however as they were not bred specifically as such, which is why both carry out order-66. ALL Commanders seen in EP.III were trained by ARC Trooper Alpha, but they were trained as Commanders, not ARCs, but they were still allowed to wear ARC-like gear to further thier individuality, this sometimes carried over to the Troopers who served under them as well.
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 34
Location : Oregon
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