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Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by Alpha on Fri Aug 22, 2008 10:39 pm

Story: After splitting up, Viper takes the 2nd Alpha Attack battalion to drive the Seperatists out of their main base. Meanwhile, Arth and Seargeant Kerr leads 2 members of the 67th Assault battalion to infiltrate one of the CIS' labs.


"No enemies sighted. 564, scan the area again for signs of organic forces." "Yessir!"


Whoosh! "Sir, we have detected signs of enemy forces." says an Air Droid. "Get your squad organized then! Kill all intruders!" "As you wish."


BOOM! "Aah!" "Intruder alert! Intruder alert! Call for backup!" Bam-bam-bam!


Bam-bam-bam! "Kerr, use your grappling hook and attach it to the ground! Then have everyone climb up!" Arth commands. "Got it sir!"


"Be careful trooper!" Bam bam! "Sir! More droids are entering this area!" "Damn! We need to hurry!"


"424, go up first! I'll hold them off!" Kerr commands. Bam-bam!


Bam-bam! Tzz-zzt-zzz! "They're climbing up!" "Roger-roger!"


"I'm almost there..." sighs Kerr. "Sir look out!" screams 354 as a blaster bolt flies inches away from Kerr's helmet.


"AHH!" "Sir!" "Trooper, leave him!" Arth commands. "He did his job, now lets do ours!"


"We need to hurry! I sense tons more droids coming!" "Yessir!" "Now lets move it!"


Bam-bam-pew!

I hope you like it! And Seargeant Kerr does survive however, and he plays a vital part after Order 66.

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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by Commander Mongoose on Fri Aug 22, 2008 10:43 pm

Niceness! I really liked it! Howed he die? It was like a 2 foot fall!
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Re: Oxen Assault-Darkness

Post by Mike on Fri Aug 22, 2008 10:45 pm

Once again, great job, great story line.


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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by Alpha on Fri Aug 22, 2008 10:45 pm

He got shot in the head twice and fell off head first. I think you'd have died if that happened to you Razz

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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by Comrade Faie on Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:12 am

Good job! Your stories are always fun to read, and your MOC's back them up! I really like this one! Fordo Yo!

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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:46 am

Commander Faie wrote:Good job! Your stories are always fun to read, and your MOC's back them up! I really like this one! Fordo Yo!

I totally agree, I am a big fan of your work! Smile Blue Arc
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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by LegoBoyRobert on Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:51 am

Alpha wrote:He got shot in the head twice and fell off head first. I think you'd have died if that happened to you Razz
I would not die from that!....Wait did he get shot from a real gun? If so I would die.Nice MOC too!

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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:58 am

legoboyrob2 wrote:I would not die from that!....Wait did he get shot from a real gun? If so I would die.Nice MOC too!

It depends on how "real" you think a blaster is. Wink Blue Arc
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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by LegoBoyRobert on Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:06 am

astoriabluelegos wrote:
legoboyrob2 wrote:I would not die from that!....Wait did he get shot from a real gun? If so I would die.Nice MOC too!

It depends on how "real" you think a blaster is. Wink Blue Arc
A pastic LEGO gun...... real? Roll Eyes

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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:07 am

legoboyrob2 wrote:

It depends on how "real" you think a blaster is. Wink Blue Arc
A pastic LEGO gun...... real? Roll Eyes[/quote]

Use your imagination to pretend the whole STORY is real, that's what we DO here. Wink Blue Arc


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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by LegoBoyRobert on Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:12 am

astoriabluelegos wrote:
legoboyrob2 wrote:

It depends on how "real" you think a blaster is. Wink Blue Arc
A pastic LEGO gun...... real? Roll Eyes

Use you imagination to pretend the whole STORY is real, that's what we DO here. Wink Blue Arc[/quote]Wow edit that post!!! Hola Wow!

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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:21 am

legoboyrob2 wrote:

Wow edit that post!!! Hola Wow!

What do you mean? I only left out one "r".... :scratch: Blue Arc
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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Aug 23, 2008 7:46 am

Looks good, but I think it would be better if you'd actually put balloons with their script in there. Smile
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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by Tac on Sat Aug 23, 2008 11:39 am

Nice, love the scenery. (five)
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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by Commander Mongoose on Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:44 pm

Jedi say nono word! (Five) Hola Wow!
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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:54 pm

great work on this! The pictures were small enough that the text underneath could easily be read and be related to the picture. That is something other comics have been lacking. great diorama and story! Hope to see more!
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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by Alpha on Sat Aug 23, 2008 6:34 pm

By the way, did anyone catch the "He did his job, now lets do ours!" from Ep3?

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Re: Oxun Assault-Darkness

Post by astoriabluelegos on Sat Aug 23, 2008 7:29 pm

Alpha wrote:By the way, did anyone catch the "He did his job, now lets do ours!" from Ep3?

Oh, no, I can't belive I MISSED that! Mad Blue Arc
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