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Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

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Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Wed Aug 27, 2008 3:15 am

ARC Commander Dan and his legion are on a very important mission: to find out about the Retail Clan so they can destroy them, and the only person that knows about them is an old friend of Commander Dan named Floy on the planet Isvandis. Once they arrive on the planet, spider walkers start shooting at their RG and the battle begins!















After the battle, Commander Dan and his ARC troopers ran over to Floy's house and got some of the information they needed.(I will post more missions of my legion once I find out more about the Retail Clan after watching some helping CW episodes Smile )
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by legorevolution on Wed Aug 27, 2008 4:25 am

The Retail Clan? Haha that's a good name Smile I suggest you work on the base/mountain in the middle and try to add some more flow and rock to it, there were a lot of spaces in between sections. Also try to blend the green and tan baseplates together so you don't get that sudden green to tan change line. The background info was good though.
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Aug 27, 2008 7:05 am

Revo, the Retail clan was a REAL opart of the CIS. I also sugges, just as Revo said, blend the colors.
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by -Aki- on Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:16 am

It's actually pretty cool! Just match up the baseplate colours Smile.
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by major reviss on Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:15 pm

Lol, I love the easter egg.
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:28 pm

Thanks for the suggestions guys, i'll remember to do that next time. Smile
Oh and there is an easy easter egg in there that I forgot to mention. Razz
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by major reviss on Wed Aug 27, 2008 1:30 pm

It's not very hard considering it sticks out like a sore thumb. Razz
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Aug 27, 2008 2:48 pm

Spotted it before, but actually never noticed it was an EE since I didn't know what it was, here, it's actually a nice one! Laughing
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by No_Name on Wed Aug 27, 2008 4:34 pm

I really like the scene. great job. I like the bunker too. Your clones look really good in battle. Your pictures though are just a little dark. I also like the name Isvandis, but I know I've heard the name before.....

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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by Wuzzupbob on Wed Aug 27, 2008 4:50 pm

Wow! I just can't get over how good your commander Dan looks Razz

Did I mention that I'll be featuring him on CACustoms in the CW section?
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by astoriabluelegos on Wed Aug 27, 2008 5:24 pm

I like this, the colors could use a little more blending, but the battle itself is flawless! Good work! Smile Blue Arc

P.S. I saw the Maersk Sealand ship in the background, I want that thing SOOO bad, if you ever want to get rid of it let me know. Wink
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by commander crusher on Wed Aug 27, 2008 8:55 pm

I see Gary the snail joined the clone army. Cool idea with the clone/jedi figure. Marine Green

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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:20 pm

Wuzzupbob wrote:Wow! I just can't get over how good your commander Dan looks Razz

Did I mention that I'll be featuring him on CACustoms in the CW section?

Sweet thats awesome Wuzzup! I might design some 141st clones to go along with him. Wink
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by Wuzzupbob on Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:51 pm

Just let me know if you want any help or want me to make another one. Wink
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by COMMANDERBAY on Thu Sep 11, 2008 9:21 pm

pretty cool!! Laughing Love the clones Blue Arc

[Admin - Welcome to the CABG. However it is imperative that you use proper capitalization, and proper sentence structure. I do appreciate your positive atitude though, but also you should try to stick in some Constructive Criticism to help this member improve on his MOCs. Thanks.]
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by Zepher on Thu Sep 11, 2008 9:24 pm

Please don't bump old posts, UNLESS you have something important to add. Thanks.

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P.S. No one else needs to do that now! Isn't that great!
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by commander crusher on Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:29 pm

Give the kid a break.

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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by Zepher on Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:34 pm

I'm not yelling at him, but he needs to know regardless.
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by commander crusher on Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:37 pm

I know but lets not get cc007 here and yelling at him/her like what happened to me. Laughing Green

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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by 80-0 on Thu Sep 11, 2008 10:55 pm

commander crusher wrote:I know but lets not get cc007 here and yelling at him/her like what happened to me. Laughing Green

I think CC knows Zeph took care of it.

Also, do you think that topics that are bumped ONLY by n00bs and not by normal members with permission to do so should be locked? I mean, what's the point? They've already turned into spamfests several times already... :scratch:

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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by Zepher on Thu Sep 11, 2008 11:01 pm

If people have something to add, I think that they should.
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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by commander crusher on Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:13 am

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:
commander crusher wrote:I know but lets not get cc007 here and yelling at him/her like what happened to me. Laughing Green

I think CC knows Zeph took care of it.

Also, do you think that topics that are bumped ONLY by n00bs and not by normal members with permission to do so should be locked? I mean, what's the point? They've already turned into spamfests several times already... :scratch:

Are you talking about me? Fordo Yo!

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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by Rook on Fri Sep 12, 2008 3:25 pm

commander crusher wrote:Give the kid a break.

Oh yep that's good make sure the MOD's aren't doing their job. Wait!? WTF! Roll Eyes

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Re: Retail Clan Elimination Mission #1:Battle of Isvandis

Post by thunder-clone on Fri Sep 12, 2008 4:50 pm

It is really good, the background is awesome.
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