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Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Alpha on Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:04 am

Story: BOOM! A ROS carrying Arth and his squad is destroyed instantly, after it gets hit. But what hit it? A cyborg Krakar. This Krakar has been modified with a blaster cannon, 2 ferocious claws, and added strength. Will Arth & co get out alive?


"GRAAAWWR!" roars the enraged Krakar as it moves in for the kill. Arth and various other troopers have rolled onto the ground, some alive, most dead. They try to get up before the Krakar finishes them.


Arth stumbles up and jumps infront of the two troopers to protect them. "Get back, and open fire!" Arth commands. Meanwhile, Battle Droids rush in on the scene.


Arth tries to cut the blaster cannon off, but it somehow blocks it. "Damn, this thing has been reinforced with Phrik Alloy!" Arth grunts. The Krakar pulls his arm back and...


swings it on Arth, who is sent flying. Right under him, the poor gunner is shot tryin to escape. Worse, a Hellcrab joins the fight.


Viper and the remaining troopers climb over the the ROS. In confusion, another trooper joins the rest on the ground.


The Hellcrab advances to the unconscious Arth, waiting to strike. Viper realizes he needs to save Arth, or the mission will fail. "Trooper, jump off the ROS, and blast that machine to bits!" Viper commands.


BOOM! The Hellcrab explodes after taking multiple blaster bolts to the photoreceptor. Arth is saved once again by Viper.


After climbing up with great difficulty, the Krakar climbs up and stares down at the three of them. Viper realizes they will have to fight back.


After a couple shots on the head, the Krakar tumbles down, stunned. Arth regains consciousness and asks Viper what happened.


"Well sir, you were knocked out by the monster," replies Viper, not knowing what the hell that cyborg is called. "Those Seps did a pretty good job on it." "Sir, are you complementing the Seps?!?" 5304 asks Viper. "Shut it, trooper. Now lets get the hell outta here." Viper commands. "Yessir!"


Whats left of the squad files out, while Battle Droids try to follow them.


"There they are!" a droid remarks. "Blast them!" "Roger-roger!" "Huh? Ahh!" screams a Battle Droid as something knocks it off.


The Krakar, using repulsorlifts, knocks the Battle Droids and destroys them. It then follows in pursuit of Arth.

I hope you like it! And if you do, vote for Thar Assault in the Beasts of Burden!

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Awesome

Post by Delta 77-Ponce on Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:06 am

I love it!!!The one you did before this was my favorite one(intruder alert!).Nice alpha(first post woot).


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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by LegoBoyRobert on Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:06 am

Man that's great nice storyline and set! Smile

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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Comrade Faie on Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:07 am

great MOC and story once again! I'm going to start a new MOC tonight so this might provide some inspiration. Fordo Yo!

That no-good, low-down, piece of monkey manure "g" isn't working. Fordo Yo!


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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Alpha on Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:09 am

Actually, my inspiration was from Legorevs, who is also entering the Beast of Burden. I must say Legorev is #2 after Rook.

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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Aug 30, 2008 12:22 am

I'm liking that hellcrab a lot! Smile
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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Zepher on Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:11 am

Alpha wrote:Actually, my inspiration was from Legorevs, who is also entering the Beast of Burden. I must say Legorev is #2 after Rook.

And fast aproaching Nmber One. hmm, maybe weshould have different layers of guild, like a advanced guild board. Maybe we already have one Shocked . Anyway, this is my favorite build by you Alpha. I, truth be told, find your other builds sorta mass-produced, you know, nothing really outstanding about them. This one however has an epic storyline, as well as a bunch of nice builds.
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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Alpha on Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:12 am

Yes, that Krakar is a work of art. Atleast in the creators eye.

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Post by Bly on Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:16 am

I really like it! The Krakar is built in such a simple way yet it is so effective! great job Alpha. Smile
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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by commander crusher on Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:33 am

Everyone's mocs are better than mine.

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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Alpha on Sat Aug 30, 2008 2:00 am

Thats because we have experience, you just started, so you shoul dhave good MOCs in no time.

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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Zepher on Sat Aug 30, 2008 2:02 am

Alpha is still just an okay MOC'er! Just give it time! (At Alpha: Razz )
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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Alpha on Sat Aug 30, 2008 2:06 am

Yes, I am by no means a good MOCer. I usually spend about 40-60 min on a MOC. (Goes off and works on a high quality MOC)
My next MOC will be small, with details.

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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by Zepher on Sat Aug 30, 2008 2:08 am

I'm kidding, though you need to greeble (as do I...)
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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by CAPTAINREX on Sat Aug 30, 2008 4:28 am

I really like the hellcrab droid. Also like usual yuor story is interesting and fun to lead. I can't wait to see what is next.
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Re: Thar Assault-Enraged

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Aug 30, 2008 1:12 pm

That's pretty cool. I just love that hellcrab droid, I need to make my own spider droid MOC! Smile
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