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Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

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Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by Alpha on Mon Sep 01, 2008 2:20 am

Story: Viper and his squad have bene captured, and now they are set to be executed. Will they survive their encounter? And why is a CIS scientist like Alpha working with the terrorists?


"Sir, we have captured the intruders," CCD 45 informs. "Good," remarks Alpha. "Grr..." Viper grunts as he is pulled foward.


"Well if it isn't Viper." Aaron remarks. "You remember the last time we m-" "Don't remind me.." Viper interupts. Aaron was once a scientist working for the Republic, but suddenly he defected. Viper was in his lab on Kamino when Aaron suddenly turned and shot Viper in the head. It didn't kill him, but it gave him a nasty scar. "This is a mistake, you're surrounded by our forces. We have blocked every entrance." "Well right now, apparently you're surrounded by our forces." remarks Aaron.


"And also right now, you're all about to die. Good-bye old friend." Aaron sneers.


Aaron raises his blaster pistol, and reloads it. He aims and...


TZZZT! Comes a whirling lightsaber out of the blue. Arth appears on the scene and decapitates 2 Battle Droids and Aaron's hand in one swift stroke. "AHH!" Aaron yelps. "You again! It's time for you to be silenced for the last time!" Alpha screams in outrage, after what Arth did to his lab on Oxun.


Right as Alpha shoots Arth, Viper picks up a fallen Battle Droid's blaster and blasts Alpha in the chest. "Ahh!" he screams. Arth deflects the shot into a control panel, which causes the lights to go out. "Switch on your floodlights!" Viper commands.


The other troopers pick up the Blaster Rifles left on the floor. However, one trooper forgets about the terrorist behind him. Jack raises his gun and shoots.


Right after, another trooper swiftly delivers a blaster bolt to the head. Jack dies instantly.


Aaron then faints. "Viper, we need a Medical Capsule. He'll have to get a mechanical hand," Arth says. Arth gulps after he says mechanical hand as he just got one, after having his hand sliced off by his former master. "Yes commander." Viper replies.


Viper contacts command for a MSC, while Arth checks Aaron's pulse to make sure he is still alive.


A trooper quickly arrives with the MSC. "Hurry, get him on! We need to hurry! The terrorists have set detonators off around the perimeter of this base!" "Got it, trooper. Prepare to attach tubes to neck and arm." Viper commands.


As Aaron is put onto the stretcher, Arth begins to walk towards checkpoint 102, where they will get picked up by a modified ROS.


It turns out Alpha survives the shot. He quickly remembers in the event of an emergency, they would blow up the base. Realizing he has few minutes to get out, he starts crawling to get to the main control panel, where he will attempt to shut down the detonators.

Hope you enjoy! And Aaron dies after he is infected.

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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by major reviss on Mon Sep 01, 2008 3:22 am

I like the story, but the room seems too small for all the figs!
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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by Zepher on Mon Sep 01, 2008 3:43 am

I like the size, one of your best. Would you mind doing something like I did with my battles, in order of appearance?

http://cabg.forumotion.com/members-legion-threads-f15/the-313th-legion-t125.htm

Under battles! If you could that, would be awesome. I would love to go back and re-read them all in order. I think it's wierd that you named a evil character after yourself.
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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by Alpha on Mon Sep 01, 2008 3:48 am

Zepher wrote:I like the size, one of your best. Would you mind doing something like I did with my battles, in order of appearance?

http://cabg.forumotion.com/members-legion-threads-f15/the-313th-legion-t125.htm

Under battles! If you could that, would be awesome. I would love to go back and re-read them all in order. I think it's wierd that you named a evil character after yourself.

Actually I did do that, just I got lazy and skipped Oxun and Quath. However, I have did it though, in the title ranks. Stand by.

Sorry for double post, but I have a list here.

Jungle Assault
Wrapping Up

Tatooine Assault
A Sandy Welcome
Breaking the Silence
Arrival at Last
Machines Making Machines

Oxun Assault
Project Alpha
Darkness
Recon
Narrow Escape
Master vs Master

Quath Assault
Terrorism
Terrorism Part ll

Thar Assault
Enraged
Attack of the Clones
Lab Infiltration
Intruder Alert
Order 66
Last of the Jedi

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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by DarthPineapple on Mon Sep 01, 2008 7:03 am

That's a very long list! May I suggest taking a bit more time for your MOC's, everything is just a baseplate with some bricks on.
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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by -Aki- on Mon Sep 01, 2008 8:19 am

I love it! I like how we get to learn a bit more about Vipers past!
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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by Alpha on Mon Sep 01, 2008 3:34 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:That's a very long list! May I suggest taking a bit more time for your MOC's, everything is just a baseplate with some bricks on.

I ran out of SNOT bricks, I should have skipped SNOTTING the hallway. I think all the detail is there.

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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by Comrade Faie on Mon Sep 01, 2008 3:54 pm

Very good! The story amazed me! Fordo Yo!

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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by legorevolution on Tue Sep 02, 2008 2:02 am

Storyline=epic win. The captured soldiers was a brilliant idea, as well as the traitor. I like how you incorporated the floodlights and medical capsul into this moc. Let's hunt down and kill all those terrorists in the Clone Wars!
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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by thunder-clone on Sun Sep 14, 2008 9:17 am

I like the traitor idea, and captured clones fantastic. It was awesome and the story board was great. Pilot
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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by -Aki- on Sun Sep 14, 2008 9:19 am

thunder-clone wrote:I like the traitor idea, and captured clones fantastic. It was awesome and the story board was great. Pilot

PLEASE stop bumping old topics! Don't you care about what people say when they shout "STOP BUMPING!"?
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Re: Quath Assault-Terrorism Part ll

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:27 pm

Aki-kundu wrote:
thunder-clone wrote:I like the traitor idea, and captured clones fantastic. It was awesome and the story board was great. Pilot

PLEASE stop bumping old topics! Don't you care about what people say when they shout "STOP BUMPING!"?

Roll Eyes He's so pathetic, isn't he?
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