604th Legion Vignette: Mygetto Order 66

Uhhh, sorry if this is bad. I think this is HORRIBLE. My imagination is failing right now, so... ya. It's hard to put so much detail in such little space. The next vig will be much bigger.

This is TO much like how Kundi (SP?)died. This takes place on Mygetto, and Order 66 reached the 604th. Exer and his squad are trying to reach a Separatist Base, containing a plan, a plan to destroy the republic. Iswas told Drake to stay at the temple. Mistake.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2330.jpg Iswas: Troopers! Lets move!

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2343.jpg Exer: I'm getting a call from The Emperor. Gather the troops.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2332.jpg Exer: Yes, my lord? Emperor: Execute order 66. Exer: It will be done, my lord.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2333.jpg Iswas(who was eavesdropping on the troops): What is this 66?

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2335.jpg: Iswas: Who was that? Exer: Your death. Trooper: Can you think of anything better to say? That sucks!

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2336.jpg Exer: Im sorry, master. Open fire!

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2337.jpg *Iswas jumps* Exer: What are you doing standing there?! SHOOT!

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2339.jpg Trooper: AHHH! Exer: OPEN FIRE!

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2340.jpg Blam Blam Blam!

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2341.jpg Hissss. Exer: Well done.

http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/CommanderN09/Order66/img_2342.jpg Emperor: Yes? Exer: He's dead. Emperor: Good. Meet back with the 501st, and prepare for a raid in the Jedi Temple.

Yes I realized that sucked. Not the story line, the scenery did. And find the Easter Eggs!

Comments appreciated!

Once again, flat, boring, dead guy. Seriously, make something new!

What uberlag said, this is getting boring. White Mygeeto? Blah. Ashes are grey. The EE is that paper with 2 smilies, but seriously, if you're going to COPY me, at least make something funny or hard to find IN THE MOC ITSELF. This is no fun. I'll just look for a areal or side shot and there it is.

I think you should do bignettes it gives you more space for more stuff. A lot of your vignettes look the same.

Erm, the clones called Palpatine 'The Chancellor' until he declared the 'First Galactic Empire', if you recall.

Well, I'd suggest doing a Bignette. Make it on a bridge, and add two curbs with maybe a chunk broken off the bridge. Then add a pile of rubble and be sure to make the ground grey. Mygeeto is like a snowy Kamino, but REALLY windy so the snow doesen't last on the platforms for very long.

As for the figs, keep them but you just need to add some more action, maybe a few droid parts scattered around, plus the area updates as listed above.

A vignette is 8x8. This looks like 12x12.

Make the scenery bigge and work on the background.

thunder-clone wrote:Make the scenery bigge and work on the background.

STOP IT NOW! Someone please ban him!

I've already informed Rook now. i hope he will ban him or give him a warning.