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Tatooine defence-Endgame

Post by -Aki- on Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:18 pm

Story After making it out, squad 101 encounter some droid resistance under a bridge. However, the duel between Darth Shade and Alec continues; on the bridge above...

"You are powerful indeed. You could be a great Sith" Darth shade says in his gravely, disturbing voice. "My Alliance is to the republic and only the republic, Sith scum!" Alec replies as they engage

"Eat this!" Shadow yells, preparing to fire a shot at the last droid. "Uh oh" The droid just says without any emotion.

The shots blow off the droids head and one of its arms. "That's the last of them" Crash remarks.

"Wait, can you hear that?" Scar whispers. "Its the sound of lightsabers clashing!" Crash replies. "I know! I saw the bridge earlier, lets go!" Scar yells

Alec attempts to slash the Sith apprentice in two, but he just simply leans back. "Fool..." Darth shade sneers

"... You don't know the power of the dark side" He says as he focuses his hatred and anger into a single, amazing strong punch that knocks off alecs visor "Arr..." Alec moans. Already for him, the world is going black. His lightsaber goes flying out of his hand

He falls back, and uses the last of his strength to grab his lightsaber using the force. "Pathetic" Darth Shade laughs

He slices his lightsaber out of his hand. "Any last words, Jedi?" He remarks.

"Yeah, I do as a matter of fact..."

"..Behind you" He says as he blacks out

"Don't touch Alec!" Scar shouts as he whacks him in the back with the but of his gun. At the same time, Shadow fires at his back. He misses, but it burns him

Fueled with inhumane anger, Shade glares at the trio.

He jumps up, grabs Scars gun, and throws it.

He grabs Crash's...

...And throws him up to the top, stunning him

meanwhile, shadow prepares to shoot Shade. However, he doesn't move

He uses the force to snatch it, and laughs at Shadow

"Aren't you going to say any last words..."

"...Because boy I do!"

Mysteriously, Shade tosses Shadow back his gun. "So, I'm surrounded." Shade remarks

He dodges Shadows shot, and uses the force...

...On the Bridges Platform! It falls on Alec and Scar. "NO!" Shadow yells

He quickly uses the force to throw Shadow on top of the pile

Shade makes a run for it (And don't say Lol I can see crash Laughing!)

5 hours later, Shadow wakes up to find the durbis removed, Crash and Alec awake, Commander Thomson, and a medic standing over Scar

"Scar!" Medic, will he be okay?" Shadow asks. "He will after a few days in bacta. The medic replies "Thomson, what happened? Whats going on?"

The separatists have temporarily been repelled, but they are in Mos Eisley." Thomson explains "Mos Eisley? We have-" "Don't worry. Viper and his legion are dealing with them." "What about this Darth Shade?" "We don't know...

"...But he is alive and still strong."



Hope you like it! I wasn't inspired by Alpha's bridge. Actually, I made this first, but couldn't be bothered to get it on.

Hope you don't mind about my mentioning your legion, Alpha.

Enjoy!
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Re: Tatooine defence-Endgame

Post by Alpha on Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:48 pm

Good job! I like the storyline! Smile

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Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Sep 03, 2008 3:55 pm

Nice, I would add text ballons though.
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Re: Tatooine defence-Endgame

Post by flare on Wed Sep 03, 2008 9:58 pm

you stole my Jedi idea >=( .....joking

but serously I don't want you so calling 'stealing' my ideas any more.


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Post by Sialboats on Wed Sep 03, 2008 10:57 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Nice, I would add text ballons though.

I've never seen anyone on here but me who uses text balloons... :scratch:
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Post by Zepher on Wed Sep 03, 2008 11:30 pm

Sialboats wrote:
DarthPineapple wrote:Nice, I would add text ballons though.

I've never seen anyone on here but me who uses text balloons... :scratch:

http://cabg.forumotion.com/comic-creations-f16/
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Re: Tatooine defence-Endgame

Post by Alpha on Wed Sep 03, 2008 11:32 pm

flare wrote:you stole my Jedi idea >=( .....joking

but serously I don't want you so calling 'stealing' my ideas any more.

Uh, its purely coincidental, I don't think Aki would steal an idea, and if it happens just accept it. It's called inspiration if someone uses your idea. You should be proud of it, not whine and say, you stole my idea! That's all, I'm done.

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Re: Tatooine defence-Endgame

Post by flare on Wed Sep 03, 2008 11:59 pm

well Alpha not to be rude but in EVERY post of a moc he goes:

O my god that is so cool....mind if >I< *the would I* STEAL that?

gets a little annoying but I like he wants to make his own but gets a little I just didn't want him using MY Jedi idea for his own use becuase I think Each jedi should be its own Jedi...ah scew it do what you Aki Smile
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Re: Tatooine defence-Endgame

Post by Alpha on Thu Sep 04, 2008 12:04 am

Keep up the good work! I like how you mentioned my legion! Smile

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Re: Tatooine defence-Endgame

Post by Sialboats on Thu Sep 04, 2008 12:13 am

Zepher wrote:
Sialboats wrote:
DarthPineapple wrote:Nice, I would add text ballons though.

I've never seen anyone on here but me who uses text balloons... :scratch:

http://cabg.forumotion.com/comic-creations-f16/

Aaaaaah.
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Post by Alpha on Thu Sep 04, 2008 12:16 am

The thing is, I don't think this is meant to be a comic (just like mine and legorevs), and the cons of speech bubles is you really can't narrate the story. I like to add all sorts of details that can't be added in a text bubble, and I like tellin stories. Also, you wouldn't be able to see anything under the large amouts of bubbles.

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Post by Zepher on Thu Sep 04, 2008 12:33 am

Exactly. Unless I'm doing a comic, then I go with narration.
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