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The Avenger

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Sep 06, 2008 4:29 am

The Avenger was a top-secret project by the Empire. It was soon discontinued because of the expense.
After doing some "work" for them, Thunder-blade was rewarded with this ship.

Specs.

Manufacturer: Imperial Scientists
Class: Starfighter
Weapons: 2 Dual laser cannons, 6 torpedo launchers, and 2 ion cannons
Other: Though small, this starship had a hyper drive and a cloaking device (take that officer on The Executor)

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Re: The Avenger

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:49 am

It's too blocky on some places, and I don't like the lighty bley / light gray mix.
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Re: The Avenger

Post by J4ke on Sat Sep 06, 2008 10:37 am

great start, but some things need to be altered for extra coolness.

Firstly, get rid of those Starwars blasters and make your own brick-built versions.
The 4x12 curving slope on the side is nice, but the brickbuild section directly below it needs to be smoothed out, as it creates a nasty contrast.
The wings are a very strange shape indeed, but if you like them like that, then it's your decision. I'd get rid of those extra few plates you put at the top to give the blue triangles more height. Also, why is an Imperial ship displaying the Republic logo? Razz
The rear landing gear is cool but the front landing gear is too blocky. Give it some bigger feet and add greebles.
Some more greebles on the top, instead of those blue roof tiles, would be great.
Finally, seperate your grey from your bley.

Hope that helps, you've got a good model here, it just needs some final touches.

Oh, and it was Captain Lorth Needa who lost the Falcon. Wink

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Re: The Avenger

Post by ~KF~ on Wed Sep 10, 2008 3:12 am

This is truly an incredible ship. I love the color scheme and the cockpit especially. The only suggestions I have would be to raise the top by one brick or so, since it's too low for a minifig to stand; put a bit more detail into the thrusters; and fill in some of the space on the inside. There's enough room for probably two more crew members, or some supply compartments, or a bunk, or something like that.

All in all, though, a very inspirational job. Smile
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Re: The Avenger

Post by thunder-clone on Fri Sep 12, 2008 7:07 pm

It truly is great and I love the choice of weapons. Choosing blue for the ship. About 4/5.
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Re: The Avenger

Post by Clonecommando007 on Fri Sep 12, 2008 10:34 pm

thunder-clone wrote:It truly is great and I love the choice of weapons. Choosing blue for the ship. About 4/5.

You're doing a lot better since I banned you. However, it isn't really necessary to reply to every single topic that's new. Wink

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