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Un-named Artillery Walker

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Post by Sialboats Sun Sep 07, 2008 9:14 pm

CONTEST SUBMISSION: Do not assist if you don't want to aid the enemy Smile.



First off, bear with me, my old camera died and this new one isn't worth a large mound of human excrement. The picture resolution sucks.

So, this MOC is a mobile artillery platform, designed to bring a lighter piece of cannon into inaccessable areas or to bring it in very quickly. The main problems I'm having with this one is the fact that the legs are hard to beef up, and the color-scheme is sketchy. Feel free to point out others, the solutions to any, and be brutal should you need to.

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Gun undeployed, side shot.

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Front shot, hatch open for no-sensor sighting.


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Gun deployed, side shot.
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Post by Commander Mongoose Sun Sep 07, 2008 9:17 pm

I really like it! The only thing is, I think that it needs some protection for the gunner.
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Post by J4ke Sun Sep 07, 2008 9:31 pm

Unfortunately I can't say as much as I like, lest I over-inspire you (Razz), but it looks nice, although there is plenty of room for improvement (Akk, contrasting angles!)

Also, could I please ask you to maybe remove all but one of your pictures but one, and replace them with links. My internnet connection is by no means slow, but it still took me a while to load this page. Thanks. Smile
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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Sep 07, 2008 10:39 pm

Looks pretty good! It looks like the big brother of the 2009 clone battlepack walker!
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Post by legorevolution Mon Sep 08, 2008 7:34 am

Not bad for a rookie Wink I like the overall shape and design but I agree with the gunner needing protection. Finally I've seen some good use of those shield pieces from the BARC speeders! Hooray!
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Post by TK47 Mon Sep 08, 2008 7:56 am

I have to agree with Thunder-blade about the big brother of the 2009 clone battle pack, it's got a very nice design, looking foward to seeing more of your work.
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