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Post by Darth Yoda Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:20 am

I made this partly from my clone walker entry for this months contest . The CAS (commando assault speeder has room for two special clones for important missions. Sorry that there is not any actual commandos, Feel free to ask any questions, Thanks! Smile

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Post by Clonecommando007 Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:24 am

You've gotta reduce the picture size; too big for me to open. I'll comment on it when I actually have five minutes to wait for each picture to load. It looks like good picture quality though.
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Post by Alpha Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:28 am

I'll host it, should be faster.

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Overall, it looks good, however the front needs a tad bit more work. Fill in those gaps and make it sleek! I like the back though! Smile
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Post by 80-0 Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:30 am

Wow, that's really neat! I actually like the front, and the sides are also good! great pic quality, btw! Smile
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Post by Clonecommando007 Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:32 am

The sides and back are really nice; but the AT-ST driver isn't doing anything for me. The front is a little iffy, but I like the turret up there.
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Post by 667thLegion Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:34 am

Yeah, it does look good! Smile The front might need something, but I can't say what exactly. :scratch:
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Post by 80-0 Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:35 am

Yeah, give that clone a clone helmet! I bet he misses his HUD... Sad

The main thing about the front that I like is the top. The bottom area needs some filling in. Wink
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Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:38 am

Dang that looks really good! I really like the back, but you should remove those tall dark grey peices in the front and use a nicer looking peice.
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Post by Darth Yoda Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:42 am

Sorry about the figs, maybe I will get some in tomorrow. Smile Any ideas? Camo
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Post by flare Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:42 am

Pretty good even though they maybe moving fast but the pilots need some shielding though.

That may not make it a speeder but you got to think what the emeny would do If they say it coming you know? Wink
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Post by Darth Yoda Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:45 am

I tried to make it like the flash speeder, except bigger. Does that make more sense? Razz
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Post by DarthPineapple Sat Sep 13, 2008 8:27 am

It looks too busy, everywhere. Here and there are pipes, studs, whatever popping out of the overall design. Remove those and you've got yourself a nice speeder.
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Post by Clonecommando007 Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:47 pm

Actually I kinda liked the overaccented greebles. Though the front is way to bland.
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Post by Bly Sat Sep 13, 2008 1:08 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:Actually I kinda liked the overaccented greebles. Though the front is way to bland.

I agree. It's definitely a nice speeder but the front just needs to have some work on it. Smile
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Post by thunder-clone Sat Sep 13, 2008 7:56 pm

Loks a bit like ITFX tank but yours is a carrier.
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Post by legorevolution Sat Sep 13, 2008 8:16 pm

Lose the AT-ST driver, but the rest looks great DY. You did an excellent job with the greebles and I like how on the side the bars attach to the shuttle itself, and the wings protrude off the side of that. You've got the color scheme down no-doubt. Smile Nice turret too by the way.
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