541st Chronicles #10: Disabled Defenses

Yes, I know it's pretty bad (gah, just aweful in fact) in comparison to my other ones, but the next one will be a helluva lot better . A little rusty on the sizing and posistioning, and haven't had a lot of time to build a more comprehensive set. But bear with me .

Since it's been a while: Previous Comic .

Wow, that was really great. A little more white bricks would be good.

Awesome. I like the gun at the beginning of the story, but I think it needs a few more slopes/greebles. The droid with the jetpack and gun on his arm was sweet too. Did you have to cut or mod the arm to enable the technic pin to fit on?

legorevolution wrote: Did you have to cut or mod the arm to enable the technic pin to fit on?

I did have to cut the arm, but that arm was broken prior to that anyways .

Sialboats wrote:

legorevolution wrote: Did you have to cut or mod the arm to enable the technic pin to fit on?

I did have to cut the arm, but that arm was broken prior to that anyways .

I guess that can justify that then. The arm would just have to be thrown out anyways. Looks good.

This one was a let down from your others. There was no meat to the battle. I liked the first four, they lead into eachother. Try that again. I'd also love to see the troop that landed in one of them as a third character, the guy in yellow, you know?

Zepher wrote:I'd also love to see the troop that landed in one of them as a third character, the guy in yellow, you know?

He is a third character, in fact. Although I really haven't had much of a chance to elaborate on him... planning to do some of that with this next one. Character progression, and the introduction of the Seps .


But, I just needed to tie up the battle real quickly. Time's been scarce lately .

It's nice, although the pictures are too big again ( ) The text on the last one disappears.

Awsome, great setting and effects I can't wait to see more.

Very good, the setting and the effects were great as normal. Keep up the great work.

Very good, the setting and the effects were great as normal. Keep up the great work.