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Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

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Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by Alpha on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:41 pm

Story: After being tasked to destroy an Underwater Experimental Lab (UEL), Arth and the 704th plunge into the watery depths of Aquilaris. When they reach the Lab, they find out it is protected by sheets of Phrik Alloy. Will they ever get in? Or will the mission be a failure?


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Three Marines with Viper and Arth


Inside the Lab's turret range


The crashed AAV

Also, the green stuff is kelp and thanks to Bly for the name! If you want pics of the Marine's backpack, I can snap a few.

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Post by major reviss on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:43 pm

That looks pretty cool. I think the bacpack could use a little refinement though. And that one trooper is going to die!
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by commander crusher on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:44 pm

Wow geart narration. I like the sceenery.

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Post by major reviss on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:45 pm

commander crusher wrote:Wow geart narration. I like the sceenery.
great and scenery! Your getting better though...
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:46 pm

This is really nice! I like the marines, and the bunker is really nice.

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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by Alpha on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:47 pm

commander crusher wrote:Wow geart narration. I like the sceenery.

Did I narrate in this story? :scratch: I only do that in story MOCs.

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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by major reviss on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:52 pm

Alpha wrote:Story: After being tasked to destroy an Underwater Experimental Lab (UEL), Arth and the 704th plunge into the watery depths of Aquilaris. When they reach the Lab, they find out it is protected by sheets of Phrik Alloy. Will they ever get in? Or will the mission be a failure?
I think that is what he was talking about. Razz
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by Bly on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:52 pm

I really enjoy seeing your scenes! great work Alpha. Smile

Also, thanks for using Aquilaris. Razz
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Sep 13, 2008 3:55 pm

Wow, I really like the CIS leader, and the water troopers! Shocked
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by thunder-clone on Sat Sep 13, 2008 7:00 pm

Good but needs background work. Wink
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Sep 13, 2008 7:02 pm

I like the scenery buy the droid part is just too simple. Add some detail.
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by Zepher on Sat Sep 13, 2008 11:10 pm

I like it, but must echo DP's thoughts.
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by 80-0 on Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:40 am

Nice! I love the use of the Clone Pilot torso backwards as the front! But that one clone won't live to die by that cannon... Razz Unless he has a rebreather; in that case, my mistake. Smile

Also, if you want a REAL Star Wars watery planet Aquaris is the right planet for you. Wink

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Nice

Post by Delta 77-Ponce on Sun Sep 14, 2008 6:49 pm

Love it.Also love thoose marine jet packs Wink .
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by -Aki- on Sun Sep 14, 2008 6:50 pm

I've noticed something! Your a modder! That techno union chest thing is a sticker!
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Re: Aquilaris Assault-Underwater Depths

Post by Darth Yoda on Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:39 pm

That sticker comes from different sets, and was probably in some set that he took apart. Smile Whitey
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