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Republic snowspeeder

Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Sep 13, 2008 9:57 pm

I heard about the y wing that is coming out, and decided to make a republic version of another rebel vehicle! Smile It is super greebled as most of my creations are. Razz

Here it is! Marine


The brickshelf gallery is still loading, so I will give you guys another deeplink of it. This pic shows the front taken off to reveal a hidden compartment, that has two backpacks full of stuff in case of a crash.
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/commanderfoxy/starwarsstuff/77thlegionbase/republicsnowspeeder/100_0974.jpg

Hope you guys like it, I am interested what everyone thinks about it! Marine
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Sep 13, 2008 9:59 pm

Not to shabby, I think the nose is a little stubby though. It's nice and small, great for reconnaissance. Not bad!
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:01 pm

Yes, nice greebling but it's just too much for a small ship. But in fact, the Y-wing was a rebel variant of the Rep one, not the other way! Razz
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by flare on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:04 pm

very nice Smile . Which planet will be seeing this in? And If you do use this in battle I would make a second one so Ait doesnt look like its a proto-type If you know what I mean Wink .

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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:06 pm

Maybe a hoth battle, I need some ideas, feel free to post some. Smile
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:06 pm

Wow that looks really awesome! But maybe you should fix those pieces in the front of the cockpit.
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:08 pm

Wow that looks really awesome! But maybe you should fix those pieces in the front of the cockpit.
Can you elaborate some more, you confused me. Razz
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:08 pm

I'd say there's a bit too much greebling for such a small ship, and none of it seems to have a clear function - with good greebles, you can usually see what they're meant to do. Also, I'd say that the wings look a bit vestigial ('stubby' Razz ), so I'd focus on broadening them, to make it look like they actually help it fly, instead of being there for decoration and to attach greebles to.
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:09 pm

darth yoda wrote:
Wow that looks really awesome! But maybe you should fix those pieces in the front of the cockpit.
Can you elaborate some more, you confused me. Razz

Those two big flat pieces in front of the cockpit.
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:10 pm

I think he knows what's in front of the cockpit. Razz What did you mean by fix them?
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:12 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:I think he knows what's in front of the cockpit. Razz What did you mean by fix them?

Maybe use different different pieces? It up to him.
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Sep 13, 2008 10:15 pm

I am working on it right now your right, those two pieces did look a bit weird.

Updated! thanks for the input, it looks a lot better now! Smile
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/commanderfoxy/starwarsstuff/77thlegionbase/republicsnowspeeder/100_0976.jpg
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/commanderfoxy/starwarsstuff/77thlegionbase/republicsnowspeeder/100_0981.jpg
http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/commanderfoxy/starwarsstuff/77thlegionbase/republicsnowspeeder/100_0980.jpg

Deeplinks activated! Razz
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Sep 14, 2008 12:54 am

I like both versions! This is pretty cool; I've never seen someone try this before. great original idea, and greebling!

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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Sun Sep 14, 2008 1:36 am

It's much better now that you've de-greebled it, but the wings still look a bit stumpy (and pointy!) compared to the bulky body. I say you either need to compact the body or lengthen the wingspan.
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Sep 14, 2008 2:28 pm

That's 10x better now, great work! Smile
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Re: Republic snowspeeder

Post by major reviss on Sun Sep 14, 2008 3:02 pm

Make the wings less stumpy and you have a great MOC there!
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