Tatooine Defense: Ambush
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Tatooine Defense: Ambush
Time: 2100 hours
Location: A small base 200 kilometers west of Mos Espa
"I hope that Padawan of yours returns soon. We have to discuss tommorows battle plans."
"Well speak of the devil."
"The scouting was useless, I found nothing but sand."
"Drop your weapons!" "You obviously didn't look over there" "Sorry master"
*Pew Pew* *Crash*
"That was easy enough."
"I think you spoke too soon master Jedi."
*Pew*
*Boom* *Crash*
*Fzt* "Flank it, Lik get its guns!"
*Fwoomp*"Shoot Reviss!"
"Lik, no!!! Yergh!"
"Argh! Reviss see if Lik's alive!" "Yes sir!"
*Fzt fzt*
"Yergh!"
"I'm sorry sir, we've lost him" "Curses, well lets clean up this mess..."
FIN
Location: A small base 200 kilometers west of Mos Espa
"I hope that Padawan of yours returns soon. We have to discuss tommorows battle plans."
"Well speak of the devil."
"The scouting was useless, I found nothing but sand."
"Drop your weapons!" "You obviously didn't look over there" "Sorry master"
*Pew Pew* *Crash*
"That was easy enough."
"I think you spoke too soon master Jedi."
*Pew*
*Boom* *Crash*
*Fzt* "Flank it, Lik get its guns!"
*Fwoomp*"Shoot Reviss!"
"Lik, no!!! Yergh!"
"Argh! Reviss see if Lik's alive!" "Yes sir!"
*Fzt fzt*
"Yergh!"
"I'm sorry sir, we've lost him" "Curses, well lets clean up this mess..."
FIN
Last edited by major reviss on Sun Sep 28, 2008 2:41 am; edited 1 time in total
major reviss- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Hicktown, USA(KANSAS)
Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush
I don't see much of a camp there. But I like it.
Mike- Non-Guild Member
- Location : Eh, Why should I tell you? Stalker...
Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush
I like the overall MOC, but it looks plain. It's just a baseplate, with some figs, and some things on.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush
Alpha wrote:but itlooksIS plain.
I'm afraid that sums it up. You can write all the text you want, but if it doesn't engage the viewer...
Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush
It had some nice simple action in it, but it is a bit plain. Not many droids either. About 10 B1's would've made it better.
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush
Not very good in my book. It is just a baseplate with some random stuff on it. Plus, I don't think a master would say "Curses!" when he looses his padawaan.
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush
Cool ! but why didn't he just push that spider thing(that was geaneusly built) away right away?
Astor- Guild Member
- Age : 28
Location : Oslo, Norway
Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush
I enjoyed this, it's different than what other people here make.
Try to take less blurry pictures, and maybe some small text balloons are better as well. You've space enough.
Try to take less blurry pictures, and maybe some small text balloons are better as well. You've space enough.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
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