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Tatooine Defense: Ambush

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Tatooine Defense: Ambush

Post by major reviss on Sun Sep 28, 2008 2:23 am

Time: 2100 hours
Location: A small base 200 kilometers west of Mos Espa

"I hope that Padawan of yours returns soon. We have to discuss tommorows battle plans."

"Well speak of the devil."

"The scouting was useless, I found nothing but sand."

"Drop your weapons!" "You obviously didn't look over there" "Sorry master"

*Pew Pew* *Crash*

"That was easy enough."

"I think you spoke too soon master Jedi."

*Pew*

*Boom* *Crash*

*Fzt* "Flank it, Lik get its guns!"

*Fwoomp*"Shoot Reviss!"

"Lik, no!!! Yergh!"

"Argh! Reviss see if Lik's alive!" "Yes sir!"

*Fzt fzt*

"Yergh!"

"I'm sorry sir, we've lost him" "Curses, well lets clean up this mess..."

FIN


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Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush

Post by Mike on Sun Sep 28, 2008 2:31 am

I don't see much of a camp there. Razz But I like it.
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Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush

Post by Alpha on Sun Sep 28, 2008 3:00 am

I like the overall MOC, but it looks plain. It's just a baseplate, with some figs, and some things on.

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Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush

Post by Sialboats on Sun Sep 28, 2008 3:08 am

Alpha wrote:but it looks IS plain.

I'm afraid that sums it up. You can write all the text you want, but if it doesn't engage the viewer...

Waaa!
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Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Sep 28, 2008 3:20 am

It had some nice simple action in it, but it is a bit plain. Not many droids either. About 10 B1's would've made it better.

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Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush

Post by -Aki- on Sun Sep 28, 2008 8:44 am

Not very good in my book. It is just a baseplate with some random stuff on it. Plus, I don't think a master would say "Curses!" when he looses his padawaan.
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Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush

Post by Astor on Sun Sep 28, 2008 9:02 am

Cool Smile ! but why didn't he just push that spider thing(that was geaneusly built) away right away?
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Re: Tatooine Defense: Ambush

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Sep 28, 2008 9:24 am

I enjoyed this, it's different than what other people here make. Roll Eyes

Try to take less blurry pictures, and maybe some small text balloons are better as well. You've space enough.
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