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Post by Bly Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:23 pm

After fighting droid lines in the Apaga cavern, Master Shao sends more clones into the cavern to do some recon. But they don't know the danger they are in...

Stadi: How much further into the cave must we go?
Kopi: Until we find something.
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Stadi: But there might not be anything in here.
Battle Droid: Intruders! Intruders in Gamma testing grounds.
Kopi: Droids! Quick men!
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Stadi: Lieutenant, what is Gamma?
Kopi: I don't know but whatever it is, it can't be good. Let's turn around and go back.
Stadi: OK, ARRRGHHH.... what is that thing.
Kopi: RUN!
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Lieutenant Kopi, please respond. Kopi? Report. Lieutenant, are you there?
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Sorry that the pictures didn't turn out great, I took them on my old camera. Enjoy!
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Post by -Aki- Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:25 pm

Wow! I swear I jumped out of my skin when that thing appeared out of nowhere! Plus, it was creepy when there was that clone head.
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Post by Bly Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:30 pm

Aki-kundu wrote:Wow! I swear I jumped out of my skin when that thing appeared out of nowhere! Plus, it was creepy when there was that clone head.

Thanks! I was aiming for a cheesy sci-fi movie kinda feel. Razz
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Post by -Aki- Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:36 pm

commanderbly42 wrote:
Aki-kundu wrote:Wow! I swear I jumped out of my skin when that thing appeared out of nowhere! Plus, it was creepy when there was that clone head.

Thanks! I was aiming for a cheesy sci-fi movie kinda feel. Razz


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Post by Astor Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:59 pm

Cool comic and nice idea with that gamma thing. But it would have been cooler in a movie because I didn't get scared and we didn't see gamma fight. Roll Eyes

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Post by Bly Fri Oct 03, 2008 10:07 pm

Astor wrote:Cool comic and nice idea with that gamma thing.But it whould have been cooler in a movie cuz I didn't got scared and we didn't see gamma fight. Roll Eyes

True but since my camera is crappy at making videos, it's a no can do. And don't worry, project Gamma will return in the next installment. Smile
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Post by Astor Fri Oct 03, 2008 10:15 pm

commanderbly42 wrote:
Astor wrote:Cool comic and nice idea with that gamma thing.But it whould have been cooler in a movie cuz I didn't got scared and we didn't see gamma fight. Roll Eyes

True but since my camera is crappy at making videos, it's a no can do. And don't worry, project Gamma will return in the next
installment. Smile

Awesome! Can't wait to see it! Smile
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Post by commander crusher Fri Oct 03, 2008 10:45 pm

I don't get the point but good job. Marine
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Post by DarthPineapple Sat Oct 04, 2008 7:40 am

Looks great! Since you've got plenty of open space in there, some text bubbles would be even better! Smile
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Post by legorevolution Sat Oct 04, 2008 7:42 am

I think the puddle of blood under the Trooper's helmet is a little over dramatic but it had a good storyline.
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Post by TK47 Sat Oct 04, 2008 8:27 am

Amazing, it's so mysterious and the set is so brilliantly designed.

But you know what makes it so good? You can't see outside the set which intensifies your emotions!
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Post by Clonecommando007 Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:05 pm

Once again nice work on the cave. Watch out for spiders! Shocked Laughing
My one criticism would be to keep just the model in the picture...I could see backround stuff like carpet in the corners and that gets annoying fast. It also detracts from the model and makes it look less professional.
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Post by Axel Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:29 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:I could see backround stuff like carpet in the corners and that gets annoying fast.

Just use the crop tool in Microsoft word for that. Anyway, nice set, has a nice old movie feel to it. Classic style of attack. Reminds me of the scene in LOTR 3 when the big spider is looming above Frodo.


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Post by 80-0 Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:34 pm

legorevolution wrote:I think the puddle of blood under the Trooper's helmet is a little over dramatic but it had a good storyline.

Yeah; that brick isn't quite what I'd use. :scratch:

But the story is pretty neat; reminds me of something from Republic Commando when they hide after spotting an Advanced Dwarf Spider Droid at the end of a hall. But of course, they're not mere white jobs and survived. Razz

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Clonecommando007 wrote:I could see backround stuff like carpet in the corners and that gets annoying fast.

Just use the crop tool in Microsoft word for that. Anyway, nice set, has a nice old movie feel to it. Classic style of attack. Reminds me of the scene in LOTR 3 when the big spider is loomign above Frodo.

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Post by Comrade Faie Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:56 pm

The puddle of blood sort of surprised me. I like the creature you built too. Can't wait to see the next one! Fordo Yo!
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Post by Commander Lukas Sat Oct 04, 2008 2:07 pm

nice comic! Kabam! Kabam! Kabam! Kabam! Kabam!

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Post by DarthPineapple Sat Oct 04, 2008 2:10 pm

commander wrote:nice comic! Kabam! Kabam! Kabam! Kabam! Kabam!

Please use punctuation, and post at least 5 words in a post. 1 smiley is enough as well.
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Post by Bly Sat Oct 04, 2008 2:14 pm

Thanks guys! I tried to keep the carpet to a minimal since it does look bad. I'm beginning to get the next one ready as well so that isn't far off! Smile
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