Teyr - Recon in the cave
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Teyr - Recon in the cave
After fighting droid lines in the Apaga cavern, Master Shao sends more clones into the cavern to do some recon. But they don't know the danger they are in...
Stadi: How much further into the cave must we go?
Kopi: Until we find something.
Stadi: But there might not be anything in here.
Battle Droid: Intruders! Intruders in Gamma testing grounds.
Kopi: Droids! Quick men!
Stadi: Lieutenant, what is Gamma?
Kopi: I don't know but whatever it is, it can't be good. Let's turn around and go back.
Stadi: OK, ARRRGHHH.... what is that thing.
Kopi: RUN!
Lieutenant Kopi, please respond. Kopi? Report. Lieutenant, are you there?
Sorry that the pictures didn't turn out great, I took them on my old camera. Enjoy!
Stadi: How much further into the cave must we go?
Kopi: Until we find something.
Stadi: But there might not be anything in here.
Battle Droid: Intruders! Intruders in Gamma testing grounds.
Kopi: Droids! Quick men!
Stadi: Lieutenant, what is Gamma?
Kopi: I don't know but whatever it is, it can't be good. Let's turn around and go back.
Stadi: OK, ARRRGHHH.... what is that thing.
Kopi: RUN!
Lieutenant Kopi, please respond. Kopi? Report. Lieutenant, are you there?
Sorry that the pictures didn't turn out great, I took them on my old camera. Enjoy!
Re: Teyr - Recon in the cave
Wow! I swear I jumped out of my skin when that thing appeared out of nowhere! Plus, it was creepy when there was that clone head.
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Aki-kundu wrote:Wow! I swear I jumped out of my skin when that thing appeared out of nowhere! Plus, it was creepy when there was that clone head.
Thanks! I was aiming for a cheesy sci-fi movie kinda feel.
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commanderbly42 wrote:Aki-kundu wrote:Wow! I swear I jumped out of my skin when that thing appeared out of nowhere! Plus, it was creepy when there was that clone head.
Thanks! I was aiming for a cheesy sci-fi movie kinda feel.
Please go check out my new WW3 topic!
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Cooler in a movie
Cool comic and nice idea with that gamma thing. But it would have been cooler in a movie because I didn't get scared and we didn't see gamma fight.
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Astor- Guild Member
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Location : Oslo, Norway
Re: Teyr - Recon in the cave
Astor wrote:Cool comic and nice idea with that gamma thing.But it whould have been cooler in a movie cuz I didn't got scared and we didn't see gamma fight.
True but since my camera is crappy at making videos, it's a no can do. And don't worry, project Gamma will return in the next installment.
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commanderbly42 wrote:Astor wrote:Cool comic and nice idea with that gamma thing.But it whould have been cooler in a movie cuz I didn't got scared and we didn't see gamma fight.
True but since my camera is crappy at making videos, it's a no can do. And don't worry, project Gamma will return in the next
installment.
Awesome! Can't wait to see it!
Astor- Guild Member
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Location : Oslo, Norway
Re: Teyr - Recon in the cave
Looks great! Since you've got plenty of open space in there, some text bubbles would be even better!
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
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Location : The Netherlands
Re: Teyr - Recon in the cave
I think the puddle of blood under the Trooper's helmet is a little over dramatic but it had a good storyline.
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Amazing, it's so mysterious and the set is so brilliantly designed.
But you know what makes it so good? You can't see outside the set which intensifies your emotions!
But you know what makes it so good? You can't see outside the set which intensifies your emotions!
Re: Teyr - Recon in the cave
Once again nice work on the cave. Watch out for spiders!
My one criticism would be to keep just the model in the picture...I could see backround stuff like carpet in the corners and that gets annoying fast. It also detracts from the model and makes it look less professional.
My one criticism would be to keep just the model in the picture...I could see backround stuff like carpet in the corners and that gets annoying fast. It also detracts from the model and makes it look less professional.
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Clonecommando007 wrote:I could see backround stuff like carpet in the corners and that gets annoying fast.
Just use the crop tool in Microsoft word for that. Anyway, nice set, has a nice old movie feel to it. Classic style of attack. Reminds me of the scene in LOTR 3 when the big spider is looming above Frodo.
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Axel- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Australia
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legorevolution wrote:I think the puddle of blood under the Trooper's helmet is a little over dramatic but it had a good storyline.
Yeah; that brick isn't quite what I'd use.
But the story is pretty neat; reminds me of something from Republic Commando when they hide after spotting an Advanced Dwarf Spider Droid at the end of a hall. But of course, they're not mere white jobs and survived.
Axel wrote:Clonecommando007 wrote:I could see backround stuff like carpet in the corners and that gets annoying fast.
Just use the crop tool in Microsoft word for that. Anyway, nice set, has a nice old movie feel to it. Classic style of attack. Reminds me of the scene in LOTR 3 when the big spider is loomign above Frodo.
Shelob... Best music in the entire trilogy, except maybe the Maori chants from Moria in FotR...
80-0- Non-Guild Member
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Location : New York, New YORK!
Re: Teyr - Recon in the cave
The puddle of blood sort of surprised me. I like the creature you built too. Can't wait to see the next one!
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Re: Teyr - Recon in the cave
nice comic!
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commander wrote:nice comic!
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DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
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Location : The Netherlands
Re: Teyr - Recon in the cave
Thanks guys! I tried to keep the carpet to a minimal since it does look bad. I'm beginning to get the next one ready as well so that isn't far off!
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