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704th Battle over Metalorn

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704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by Alpha on Sat Oct 04, 2008 4:52 am

Story: After the Fireflight went into orbit, the 604th and the 704th engaged in combat with the CIS. Will they capture Grievous?

























Author's Note

All the GIMP effects were done by Thunder-blade. 50% of the credit goes to him. This is one of my silent Story Mocs. I'm not going to add a P II, as I am into Kyrt. Once again, thanks to T-b.


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Re: 704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by ODST7 on Sat Oct 04, 2008 4:55 am

Looks pretty good! Nice use of GIMP i wish i were that good. Congrats Alpha and Blade.\ Smile
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Re: 704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:01 am

I really like it! It has awesome SFX! Wink

Seriously though, this is a pretty good battle. It was fun working on it!
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Re: 704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by legorevolution on Sat Oct 04, 2008 7:21 am

I really liked the special effects and how you made a mini space battle. What I would've liked to see more of are smaller starfighter ships in the surrounding area of space.
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Re: 704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by Sialboats on Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:34 pm

Some of the explosions need work.... the smoke effects I could so do better Razz .

But I love the minis and the laser fire! I'm still not content with my technique yet...
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Re: 704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by -Aki- on Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:45 pm

That was well cool! I loved all those ships!
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Re: 704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Oct 04, 2008 12:45 pm

The last pic is cool! Shocked great work both of you! Smile
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Re: 704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sat Oct 04, 2008 1:00 pm

This is really nice! I like the diamond Republic Ships, but the firefighter isn't all that good. I like the spacebattle effects and the enlarged starfighters. Nice work!

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Re: 704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by Alpha on Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:44 am

Updated, thanks again to T-b.

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Re: 704th Battle over Metalorn

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:44 am

Once again... great work Wink I really like the poses of the starships Alpha!

Off topic: If any one need some help with some SFX, just PM me!
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