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The Assault on Kyrt PIII

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The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Alpha on Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:24 am

The Assault on Kyrt Part III







































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Landscaping. Nice. Period. I'll admit, the bridge lacks greebles, but that's not so important. It was fun to build, but a pain to host. The Arth-falling-off-bridge-appearing-to-be-shot-but-really-dodged-it is from the Bourne Ultimatum. Enjoy! Smile

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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Bly on Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:40 am

What? I thought Thar was Order 66? CONTRADICTIONS! Surprised

No, really I loved it and I thought it was better than Thar. Nice job Alpha! Smile
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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Alpha on Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:42 am

Yeah, everything else I made is now Non-Canon to my Legion's story. Now that I actually rethought it, I changed it. Tatooine never happened, Oxun never happened, Quath happened though, Thar never happened, Jungle Assault never happened, ect. Major plot change! :D Thanks!

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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Bly on Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:51 am

Alpha wrote:Yeah, everything else I made is now Non-Canon to my Legion's story. Now that I actually rethought it, I changed it. Tatooine never happened, Oxun never happened, Quath happened though, Thar never happened, Jungle Assault never happened, ect. Major plot change! Wow this thing looks Thanks!

Holy Cow, this will take some getting used too. Shocked What about that female padawan (really can't remember her name, sorry)?
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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Alpha on Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:02 am

She's still around, but I'm gonna kill her off. I want the story to be about the "relationship" with Arth and Viper, and what happens when Viper betrays Arth. And I'm still undecided if Viper gets killed by Arth, or Arth spares his life.

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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Delta 77-Ponce on Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:27 am

I loved how you put in that Arth realizes that palpatine is a sith.Im just curios are you ever going to do one when like Arth gathers jedi and helps Arth defeat Viper and palpatine??
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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Alpha on Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:04 am

No. Arth goes into hiding, and meets with Yoda, before he gets struck down by someone/something.

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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by -Aki- on Sun Oct 05, 2008 8:55 am

Wow! I didn't see that one coming! VERY nice job!
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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Astor on Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:34 am

Awesome! This is the best of your comics yet!
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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:04 pm

Very nice work, I really love this one! Smile
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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Oct 05, 2008 3:05 pm

Top left clone: AUUGH!! FRIENDLY FIRE!
Top right clone: Haha! That's for stealing my sister's Cookiees!
Top left clone: You idiot! We don't have any sisters!
Top right clone: Oh yea...


Well aside from that,
I really enjoyed the comic, particurally the part under the bridge I thought was cool. Very entertaining. Nice work!

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Re: The Assault on Kyrt PIII

Post by Alpha on Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:58 pm

Ah. Whoops. I tilted the Rifle too much. Thanks. Smile

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