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Post-apoc: Roadside slaughter

Post by -Aki- on Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:37 pm

Story: On the road to Nevada, a lone traveller was ambushed by a Axe-wielding mutant. The man was killed easily. Just when the mutant was about to feast on his kill, a group of soldiers encounter him. The mutant just ignores the bullets, and claims another victim after beheading the nearest trooper. However, the flame trooper fires his flamethrower, engulfing the mutant in flames.

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Info about mutants: After WW3, a group of cleanup troopers were tasked with cleaning up a spillage of the intelligent, extremely contagious bio-weapon Virus Omega. When it infects someone, it creates a invisible cloud around them, which is also lacking smell. Anyone who comes near the host is infected. 3 hours after being infected, the host starts to lose control of their body. Then their facial features become hideous, and occasionally limbs fall off. Then the virus takes over their brain. Although not necessary, some mutants enjoy the taste of blood and human flesh.

Enjoy! Or else I will have to let out a mutant loose in your house... Razz.
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Re: Post-apoc: Roadside slaughter

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:53 pm

As far as Post-Apoc goes...I think this is way to colorful. Post Apoc to me is a Black, Brown, and Grey, and there are dead people, and it's a nuclear wasteland, and...Too many colors I think.

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Post by -Aki- on Sun Oct 05, 2008 5:59 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:As far as Post-Apoc goes...I think this is way to colorful. Post Apoc to me is a Black, Brown, and Grey, and there are dead people, and it's a nuclear wasteland, and...Too many colors I think.

I guess so. What colours are you suggesting I should use?
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Re: Post-apoc: Roadside slaughter

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Oct 05, 2008 6:23 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:As far as Post-Apoc goes...I think this is way to colorful. Post Apoc to me is a Black, Brown, and Grey, and there are dead people, and it's a nuclear wasteland, and...Too many colors I think.

Well said. The road is okay, but the landscaping isn't.
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Re: Post-apoc: Roadside slaughter

Post by J4ke on Sun Oct 05, 2008 9:03 pm

Wow, postapoc with halluciogenic mushrooms included! Lookit all der pwetty coolahs! Laughing

Seriously, dial it down a tad. Nice idea though... Smile

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Re: Post-apoc: Roadside slaughter

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Oct 06, 2008 12:13 am

As everyone else has said, use darker colors like gray, black and brown. It will definitely improve the MOC.

And why are so many people making MOC of the Apocalypse?
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Re: Post-apoc: Roadside slaughter

Post by Axel on Mon Oct 06, 2008 5:50 am

ThunderBlade hit it. Black, greys, browns and tans really make it more apoc. Even water should be in a darker shade - it might be contaminated!
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