Post-apoc: Roadside slaughter

Story: On the road to Nevada, a lone traveller was ambushed by a Axe-wielding mutant. The man was killed easily. Just when the mutant was about to feast on his kill, a group of soldiers encounter him. The mutant just ignores the bullets, and claims another victim after beheading the nearest trooper. However, the flame trooper fires his flamethrower, engulfing the mutant in flames.

Gallery

Info about mutants: After WW3, a group of cleanup troopers were tasked with cleaning up a spillage of the intelligent, extremely contagious bio-weapon Virus Omega. When it infects someone, it creates a invisible cloud around them, which is also lacking smell. Anyone who comes near the host is infected. 3 hours after being infected, the host starts to lose control of their body. Then their facial features become hideous, and occasionally limbs fall off. Then the virus takes over their brain. Although not necessary, some mutants enjoy the taste of blood and human flesh.

Enjoy! Or else I will have to let out a mutant loose in your house... .

As far as Post-Apoc goes...I think this is way to colorful. Post Apoc to me is a Black, Brown, and Grey, and there are dead people, and it's a nuclear wasteland, and...Too many colors I think.

Clonecommando007 wrote:As far as Post-Apoc goes...I think this is way to colorful. Post Apoc to me is a Black, Brown, and Grey, and there are dead people, and it's a nuclear wasteland, and...Too many colors I think.

I guess so. What colours are you suggesting I should use?

Clonecommando007 wrote:As far as Post-Apoc goes...I think this is way to colorful. Post Apoc to me is a Black, Brown, and Grey, and there are dead people, and it's a nuclear wasteland, and...Too many colors I think.

Well said. The road is okay, but the landscaping isn't.

Wow, postapoc with halluciogenic mushrooms included! Lookit all der pwetty coolahs!

Seriously, dial it down a tad. Nice idea though...

As everyone else has said, use darker colors like gray, black and brown. It will definitely improve the MOC.

And why are so many people making MOC of the Apocalypse?

ThunderBlade hit it. Black, greys, browns and tans really make it more apoc. Even water should be in a darker shade - it might be contaminated!