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CloakShape Fighter

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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:09 am

Here is my entry I built for Rook's contest.

The CloakShape Fighter!


Length
15 meters
Maximum acceleration
3,200 G
Maximum speed (atmosphere)
950 km/h
Hyperdrive rating
None, or various classes (usually class 1.5) with upgrade kit and
Hyperdrive system
Hyperdrive sled or hyperdrive ring
Armament

* Laser cannons (2)
* Concussion missile launchers (2)
o 4 concussion missiles each, standard load

Crew
Pilot (1)
Cargo capacity
40 kilograms
Consumables
1 day
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This isn't the final build, I will probably post better versions in the future.
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Post by commander crusher Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:11 am

Wow cool. I have a question how do you make the clone heavy gun. :spammers:


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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:13 am

Crusher, your question is off topic but here's a link to the Clone Heavy Gun
Heavy Gun by Wuzzupbob
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Post by Commander N09 Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:13 am

commander crusher wrote:...how do you make the clone heavy gun.

Now you wouldn't find how to make a clone gun, in a fighter-jet topic, would you?

Anyway: I don't really enjoy the MOC at this point, but I do hope that the improved version will be SPECTACULAR!
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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:20 am

It looks alot better in person, I guess I need to work on it a bit more, the color are a a bit off, and the "roof" needs some work...
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Post by J4ke Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:46 am

OK, the most I can say for this now is that you've got the shape pretty much right.

Things to do:

Sort out the bley/grey mix.
Put in a proper a proper canopy.
Smooth out the sides of the cockpit.
Sort out the roof.
Make a more elaborate engine.
Sort out the wings.
Eliminate the conflicting angles.
Get rid of those black plates.
Beef up the connection to the rear wing.

Carry on! Smile Razz
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Post by Clonecommando007 Sun Oct 05, 2008 1:01 am

It looks like a good rough draft. By that I mean it has a good frame, but the colors are way to diversified.
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Post by Astor Sun Oct 05, 2008 11:25 am

Thunder-blade wrote:It looks alot better in person, I guess I need to work on it a bit more, the color are a a bit off, and the "roof" needs some work...

BETTER in person!? This one is gonna be awesome! Smile
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Post by DarthPineapple Sun Oct 05, 2008 12:01 pm

Could we get some pictures of the overall ship?
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Post by 80-0 Sun Oct 05, 2008 1:19 pm

Yes, or at least a gallery. The server cuts off a side of the pictures if you link to them using another server like Brickshelf or Flickr. Wink

I'd suggest putting in a real cockpit; that should be simple. Maybe try a darker version of the A-Wing cockpit. Wink

I'd also prefer if you make the back end a little larger. It stands out a lot more in the actual ship.

Also, widen the wings; they are far too short. But I appreciate how you got the ends to tilt down; that's a good thing to have.

Looks good, but you need some studlessness, at the best, no more than two colors, and expansion sizewise. Smile
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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:34 pm

Now some of you have been asking for a "real" cockpit. I am not sure what piece to use, this is what it looks like, and it is a fairly difficult cockpit... Sad
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Post by major reviss Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:50 pm

If you Brasso it, Zams airspeeder cockpit might work.
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Post by J4ke Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:58 pm

Brick-build it!

Or maybe the agents helicopter cockpit that looks ace as a Colonial Raptor cockpit could work...
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Post by Thunder-blade Mon Oct 06, 2008 12:59 am

major reviss wrote:If you Brasso it, Zams airspeeder cockpit might work.

That's a very good idea! But I only have one and I don't really want to ruin an old piece...

And Jake, what do you mean by "brick-build" it? Isn't my current cockpit brick built?
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Post by J4ke Mon Oct 06, 2008 1:08 am

No, your current cockit is made of technic angle beams. I mean, get the cheese slopes out, get the transClr plates out, and start stacking. Use smaller windcreen pieces to build into the perfectly shaped canopy.
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Post by Rook Mon Oct 06, 2008 1:56 pm

I have faith that you can improve this before the of the month. Right shape, now you just need to work on the details.
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Post by Jedi Joe Mon Oct 06, 2008 3:24 pm

I like it, it is a bit bulky, but bulk = good! Smile
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Post by TK47 Mon Oct 06, 2008 5:19 pm

Wow Hola Wow! thats a very detailed ship, it's great how you gave the description above the pictures but it looks a little dull, colour wise.
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