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The Avenger II UPDATE!

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The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Oct 08, 2008 4:36 pm

The Avenger II was the main starship that Thunder-blade used after his first ship, the Avenger, was destroyed. It was sleeker and stealthy then the first one. Like it's predecessor, the Avenger II had a hyperdrive and a cloaking device.

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Greebles

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It's predecessor:The Avenger
Enjoy!


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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Oct 08, 2008 4:45 pm

I don't like the grey/bley mixing, but otherwise it's good.
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by -Aki- on Wed Oct 08, 2008 6:20 pm

Nice! I like the interior! But I agree with DP about the colours.
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:13 pm

In my next version I will get rid of the grey/bley and I will add more guns and landing gear.

Thanks for your comments!
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 on Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:30 pm

It looks really awesome, but you should remove those two slanted 2*2 bricks next to the front of the cockpit.
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by Clonecommando007 on Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:40 pm

I've always enjoyed big, bulky ships, my friends made them all the time, and this one is very nice. great work, I love the inside and the whole main section/rest of the ship too!

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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by Mike on Wed Oct 08, 2008 10:05 pm

You used your MF for some of this, didn't you? Wink
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by J4ke on Wed Oct 08, 2008 10:15 pm

Not bad, it looks like a beefed up V-Wing, but in a good way...

Still, it's a little bare, so get greebling, both inside and out. Ditch the Star Wars cannon pieces and brickbuild your own guns too. Finally, get rid of the grey parts, replace 'em with bley. Grey is old... Razz

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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by legorevolution on Thu Oct 09, 2008 1:19 am

J4ke wrote:Not bad, it looks like a beefed up V-Wing, but in a good way...

Still, it's a little bare, so get greebling, both inside and out. Ditch the Star Wars cannon pieces and brickbuild your own guns too. Finally, get rid of the grey parts, replace 'em with bley. Grey is old... Razz

Jake and I seem to think alike often. Exactly what he said yet again, but I did like the interior of the ship and believed that was a nice touch because it looked very spacious. Throw some computers or sensors on the walls too. Also I think that you need some detailing around some engines Smile
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by commander crusher on Thu Oct 09, 2008 1:21 am

Nicejob, I really like it.

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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Oct 09, 2008 1:24 am

legorevolution wrote:
J4ke wrote:Not bad, it looks like a beefed up V-Wing, but in a good way...

Still, it's a little bare, so get greebling, both inside and out. Ditch the Star Wars cannon pieces and brickbuild your own guns too. Finally, get rid of the grey parts, replace 'em with bley. Grey is old... Razz

Jake and I seem to think alike often. Exactly what he said yet again, but I did like the interior of the ship and believed that was a nice touch because it looked very spacious. Throw some computers or sensors on the walls too. Also I think that you need some detailing around some engines Smile

Revo, what do you mean by detailing on the engines? I don't know how to fit any greebling or detail on the engines, since the engine is the basic shape I want it to be...

Also, does any one have a good landing gear method or idea?
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by legorevolution on Thu Oct 09, 2008 1:28 am

Hmm now that you bring it up if you could play around with some landing gear on this ship I think it'd look amazing. I understand your design of the engine but it looks pretty bland back there. I like the red transparent bricks but maybe you could have a 1x1 stud sticking out brick (for lack of proper name) and have a (another bad name) magnaguard claw piece stick out and hold a harry potter wand brick and then build upon it from there. It's just these little things that give it more dimensions/angles and make ships look awesome!
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:07 am

I have updated the Avenger II! It now has greebles, more guns, and a landing gear!
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by legorevolution on Thu Oct 09, 2008 6:16 am

There you go! Much better Thunderblade! Ok, I only have one complaint though- you put greebles only on the top middle of the ship! They still look good but I think if the edges had some too it'd look nice. Good work on the interior too, and nice adds to those err computers on the backpart of the ship Wink
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by Axel on Thu Oct 09, 2008 9:57 am

Meh, still need to change the colouration and make brick built guns instead. Can't really comment becaues the gallery's not public yet.
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by Rook on Thu Oct 09, 2008 2:48 pm

Nice. I see you have stepped up to another level in your building skills. "Soon you will be more powerful than any Jedi!" Laughing

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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by DarthPineapple on Thu Oct 09, 2008 4:21 pm

I say again, don't mix bley and grey
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Re:The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by TK47 on Thu Oct 09, 2008 4:24 pm

I don't think there is anything wrong with the colour, it suits well.

And there is nothing more to say, the ship is complementry in itself (If I used that word correctly, I'm really not good at english) Blue Arc
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Re: The Avenger II UPDATE!

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Oct 09, 2008 10:29 pm

Thanks for all your comments! Smile

And if I make a next revision, I will be sure to avoid gray/bley mixing in all my MOCs.

It is kinda distracting and I will keep it at minimum to none.
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