My first post apoc scene!

Well I have seen a lot of creations that involve building sideways. (Studs not on top(SNOT)) I love this way of building, it lets you use those otherwise useless pieces that just take up space. This post apoc. scene depicts three apoc. survivors that are ready to demolish a incoming darth vader zombie! The zombie is coming..... slowly...... to eat...... You!

Two overall views



Greebs


Incoming darth zombie pic


Figs!


Be as critical as you want, for I would like to make many more MOCs in this genre!

Two things that poped out at me: 1. The road is a little too narrow and 2. The road needs some rubble or to be a little smashed up! It just looks... plain to me. Otherwise, fantastic!

The road is obviously a bit plain, but the other part is very nicely done. great greebles!

Hmm, not bad. The road cold use some widening in general, also roughen the surface of it. It might be a good idea to make the yellow line thinner too, just one plate thickness should be fine.

Also, while your greebling is good, what is its purpose? It just looks like you had a checklist, and the next item was greebles, so you popped it in the middle of the floor. The idea of greebling is to add detail to a pre-existing structure, but you've kind of placed them on an area of floor...

Nice! I like the greebs!

But . you! You stole my road! I demand £1000 right now !

Aki-kundu wrote:Nice! I like the greebs!

But . you! You stole my road! I demand £1000 right now !

Actually other people have used this techinque? so he owes squat aki .

great work for a first time! I have yet to try post apoc, but I doubt my work will be as good as this. I love the snot road (though the yellow line is pretty wide) and the little camp in the old building is sweet!

Looks a little clean for post-apoc, but I love the technique you used for the road! Bravo!