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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:24 pm

Hey guys this is my first topic. Well I made a AT-LS out of the parts of Anakin's Jedi Star Fighter (2008 one) and it looks pretty good. If you have any suggestions or comments about it please tell me!


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Post by J4ke on Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:29 pm

This really isn't an AT-RT, it's too squat and bulky. If you're using the Delta 7B, take the wedges and enclosed cockpit and build a heavier walker. The thing you've built isn't great, but it's a starting point at least...

Please resize and crop your pictures too.

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Post by Rook on Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:32 pm

Read: http://www.thecabg.net/decals-and-techniques-f10/lego-art-design-principles-101-t207.htm Look closely at page 8 regarding photography.

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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:34 pm

Sorry it's the way Clonecommando007 taught me how to use images. I just made a walker because I only have the official AT-AP set and that's all. I think I'm gonna rename the AT-RT from AT-RT to AT-LS (All Terrain Light Scout) I'm don't know how to resize and crop it because I got the picture from brickshelf.

I used my White Chocolate camera (I don't have a real camera) and I know about that stuff because we are learning it in art. I don't really have any pieces that will go with it and be the same color. That's why my stuff stinks. Kashyyyk

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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:38 pm

I used my White Chocolate camera (I don't have a real camera) and I know about that stuff because we are learning it in art. I don't really have any pieces that will go with it and be the same color. That's why my stuff stinks. Kashyyyk

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Post by DarthPineapple on Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:54 pm

Yea, read the Constitution and other stuff before you post again... Roll Eyes
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Post by 80-0 on Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:58 pm

OK, I'd suggest adding some more pieces out of your own collection. That's the key to a good MOC. Wink

First off, I'd make the pod(where the clone sits) not as wide. I'd make the legs a little longer, and the place where they are attached to the pod a little more sturdy. Also, if you are going to use pieces from your collection I suggest trying to stick to one color scheme. That is, don't put blue on the left, black on the right, grey on top, white on the bottom, etc. Razz

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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:05 pm

Yeah I have a problem I don't have a lot of leg parts. I'm renaming this a AT-LS. Thanks for all the suggestions!
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Post by Jedi Joe on Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:06 pm

It's better than that one speeder you made for your application, but still needs a lot of work...

Keep trying! Smile
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Post by 80-0 on Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:06 pm

A must-have is also some blasters. Don't make them too big, though.

Remember: A small transport is a light transport is a fast transport! Razz

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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:12 pm

Thanks. Actually I'm working on that speeder right now. I'm working on the walls of it. I have a better speeder bike that's ok. You judge once I post it!
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Post by 80-0 on Mon Oct 13, 2008 3:57 pm

Commander Four wrote:Thanks. Actually I'm working on that speeder right now. I'm working on the walls of it. I have a better speeder bike that's ok. You judge once I post it!

OK!

A speeder bike, you say? Is it based on a TLC speeder bike, or is it a swoop of sorts or a totally custom speeder bike?

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Post by -Aki- on Mon Oct 13, 2008 4:27 pm

That doesn't look like a AT RT at all. It's legs are puny, and it has no guns.
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Re: AT-LS

Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 4:31 pm



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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 4:31 pm

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:
Commander Four wrote:Thanks. Actually I'm working on that speeder right now. I'm working on the walls of it. I have a better speeder bike that's ok. You judge once I post it!

OK!

A speeder bike, you say? Is it based on a TLC speeder bike, or is it a swoop of sorts or a totally custom speeder bike?
It's based on a BARC speeder and Count Dooku's speeder bike
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Re: AT-LS

Post by DarthPineapple on Mon Oct 13, 2008 4:33 pm

DON'T double post! Mad
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Re: AT-LS

Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 5:35 pm

sorry.
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Post by -Aki- on Mon Oct 13, 2008 5:55 pm

Commander Four wrote:sorry.

And the 5 word limit! Bloody hell Mad!
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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 5:56 pm

Can you stop. I seriously forgot!But check out my speeder and flamethrower guy.
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Post by -Aki- on Mon Oct 13, 2008 6:00 pm

Commander Four wrote:Can you stop. I seriously forgot!But check out my speeder and flamethrower guy.

The speeder looks ugly, but the flame thrower is nice Smile.
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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 6:02 pm

Thanks. The speeder I might add some more stuff to it. I'll see what everyone thinks about it.
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Post by 80-0 on Mon Oct 13, 2008 6:11 pm

Aki-kundu wrote:
Commander Four wrote:sorry.

And the 5 word limit! Bloody hell Mad!

Sheesh! You don't have to jump all over him like a nexu at a shaak! Roll Eyes

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Re: AT-LS

Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 6:12 pm

Ok. I'll do my best!!! Toasted!!!
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:02 pm

You're well on your way to banndom with all of those rule violations. We hate those here at the CABG.

and it looks pretty good
Also a general rule: Don't give your own MOC an opinion, unless it's negative. Don't build yourself up, take yourself down and let others build you back up. If they don't build you back up, then you need to improve on your MOCing skills.

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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:04 pm

Sorry about that. I'm really sorry about everything I've done.
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