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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:13 pm

Hey guys! Well I just updated my old Y-Wing to a Clone Wars one. Please comment so I can improve!
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Re: Y-Wing Bomber

Post by Comrade Faie on Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:15 pm

Very good start! What I suggest though is to add some yellow to the wings because the wings have a lot of yellow on them. Fordo Yo!

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Re: Y-Wing Bomber

Post by 80-0 on Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:16 pm

OK, first off, you should bear in mind the actual shape of the vessel. I'd begin by reworking the entire 'head' and core so it looks more like one big head. Then, I'd take off half of the long spindles at the end of each engine and just leave it plain with one.

Also, did you get the Tri-Fighter set from 2005? You should use one of the pod windows there for the actual gunner pod. Otherwise it looks good for a start! Smile

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Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:17 pm

Yeah. I don't know what to use on the wings though.
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Re: Y-Wing Bomber

Post by LegoBoyRobert on Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:17 pm

Commander Faie wrote:Very good start! What I suggest though is to add some yellow to the wings because the wings have a lot of yellow on them. Fordo Yo!
Maybe he does not have the right pieces. Wink Anyway very nice Y-Wing! Yellow

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Re: Y-Wing Bomber

Post by Commander Four on Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:17 pm

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:OK, first off, you should bear in mind the actual shape of the vessel. I'd begin by reworking the entire 'head' and core so it looks more like one big head. Then, I'd take off half of the long spindles at the end of each engine and just leave it plain with one.

Also, did you get the Tri-Fighter set from 2005? You should use one of the pod windows there for the actual gunner pod. Otherwise it looks good for a start! Smile
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Re: Y-Wing Bomber

Post by Clonecommando007 on Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:22 pm

This does NOT belong here. This belongs in the other creations forum. Coincidently, only Guild Members are allowed to post in the Other Creations forum! So this topic is locked.

Another note:
The only reason non-Guilders are allowed to post in the WIP forum is so they can ask for suggestions on their Application to the Guild, not to use it as a shortcut to display their MOC's!

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