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The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

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The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Alpha on Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:47 am













































Creator's Note

Was fun. Although, a pain to make, and GIMP. Here's a behind the scenes pic.



Enjoy.

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Jedi Joe on Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:04 am

Nice Alpha! great storyline idea, and how Grievous gave Alpha his ship after it was damaged. I also like the fight with the magnaguard, good effects too. And it looks like Grievous gave Alpha some of his cowardice too! Razz
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Alpha on Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:13 am

Hmm. 1 gunman vs Jedi? Jedi wins. I think Alpha was thinking about that (I was too y'know!).

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by -Aki- on Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:34 pm

That was so cool! I love that droid! But I didn't know Alpha would have hair like that Razz!
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:39 pm

Jes, resize those pics! It takes me ages to load! Shocked
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by thunder-clone on Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:04 pm

I like it, but the m6 droid and the setting was really cool.
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Clonecommando007 on Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:07 pm

I really like the M bodyguard droid, and the bridge is awesome! I like your window idea and the neon green. Good work!

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by 80-0 on Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:16 pm

Fantastic! I love the windows and the way you pictured the Venator 'spacing in, and especially how you inverted the ship to show how the gravity generator was deactivated causing the occupants to fall as the ship turns! The green is also a nice touch. Wink

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Zepher on Wed Oct 15, 2008 11:15 pm

Agreed with the above two posts, your quality is going up! great work, could still use even more stuff, try building bigger sets like this one!
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Alpha on Wed Oct 15, 2008 11:50 pm

The inverted ship was a pain. First, the windows collapsed. Second, the thin fell over and I partially had to rebuild the half of the set to get the last shot. And @ DP, sorry. I'm just used to x800. Waaa! Razz

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by 80-0 on Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:07 am

Alpha wrote:The inverted ship was a pain. First, the windows collapsed. Second, the thin fell over and I partially had to rebuild the half of the set to get the last shot. And @ DP, sorry. I'm just used to x800. Waaa! Razz

Well, it was well worth the effort, Alpha. Smile

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:24 am

Some decent action and a nice set. Could've done with a background, though - it really does just look like a MOC on some paper.
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Sialboats on Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:57 am

The shot of the Republic cruiser exiting Hyperspace is the best shot Smile ! I think it could have worked out better with a black backdrop though...

And, crikey, get rid of that title pic! I'm finding it annoying Wink ...
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Alpha on Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:56 pm

Yup. I tried to find some black cardboard, but the day before, my dad threw them away! Waaa! And yes, I do find it annoyin to read my own comics, havin to scroll down the opening. It's more work to put in, so I don't think I'll put it in the next one. Wink

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by captincomcodyct-4056 on Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:59 pm

i would like to see the star deystroyer vengence

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Alpha on Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:59 pm

Vengence? What's that?! I never made one.

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by DarthPineapple on Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:13 am

Finally took the time to read it. If you don't resize your pics, that watch out you don't put any text in the right. Smile
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:20 am

I really like it Alpha! The whole bridge is good, love the green!

I do think it need some higher walls though... and white-balance isn't the thing to use in this MOC.
Black construction paper or cloth would be good as a backdrop.
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Alpha on Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:13 am

I have no construction paper or any black cloth.

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:44 am

You could always GIMP it.... Wink
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Re: Battle over Aelos II-The FireFlight's Bridge

Post by Commander N09 on Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:38 am

Nooo! I have failed! Darn procrastination! Well, not really. So I guess this means I CAN'T do my Corps project?

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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Karil on Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:42 am

Nice job. I like your M6 droid. I would suggest better pics. But otherwise great work.
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Re: The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

Post by Alpha on Sat Oct 18, 2008 3:44 pm

Commander N09 wrote:Nooo! I have failed! Darn procrastination! Well, not really. So I guess this means I CAN'T do my Corps project?

This happens AFTER Metalorn...

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