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The Battle over Aelos II - The Fireflight's Bridge

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Was fun. Although, a pain to make, and GIMP. Here's a behind the scenes pic.

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Post by Jedi Joe Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:04 am

Nice Alpha! great storyline idea, and how Grievous gave Alpha his ship after it was damaged. I also like the fight with the magnaguard, good effects too. And it looks like Grievous gave Alpha some of his cowardice too! Razz
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Post by Alpha Wed Oct 15, 2008 3:13 am

Hmm. 1 gunman vs Jedi? Jedi wins. I think Alpha was thinking about that (I was too y'know!).
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Post by -Aki- Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:34 pm

That was so cool! I love that droid! But I didn't know Alpha would have hair like that Razz!
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Post by DarthPineapple Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:39 pm

Jes, resize those pics! It takes me ages to load! Shocked
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Post by thunder-clone Wed Oct 15, 2008 8:04 pm

I like it, but the m6 droid and the setting was really cool.
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:07 pm

I really like the M bodyguard droid, and the bridge is awesome! I like your window idea and the neon green. Good work!
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Post by 80-0 Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:16 pm

Fantastic! I love the windows and the way you pictured the Venator 'spacing in, and especially how you inverted the ship to show how the gravity generator was deactivated causing the occupants to fall as the ship turns! The green is also a nice touch. Wink
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Post by Zepher Wed Oct 15, 2008 11:15 pm

Agreed with the above two posts, your quality is going up! great work, could still use even more stuff, try building bigger sets like this one!
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Post by Alpha Wed Oct 15, 2008 11:50 pm

The inverted ship was a pain. First, the windows collapsed. Second, the thin fell over and I partially had to rebuild the half of the set to get the last shot. And @ DP, sorry. I'm just used to x800. Waaa! Razz
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Post by 80-0 Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:07 am

Alpha wrote:The inverted ship was a pain. First, the windows collapsed. Second, the thin fell over and I partially had to rebuild the half of the set to get the last shot. And @ DP, sorry. I'm just used to x800. Waaa! Razz

Well, it was well worth the effort, Alpha. Smile
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Post by The Jinja Ninja Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:24 am

Some decent action and a nice set. Could've done with a background, though - it really does just look like a MOC on some paper.
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Post by Sialboats Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:57 am

The shot of the Republic cruiser exiting Hyperspace is the best shot Smile ! I think it could have worked out better with a black backdrop though...

And, crikey, get rid of that title pic! I'm finding it annoying Wink ...
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Post by Alpha Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:56 pm

Yup. I tried to find some black cardboard, but the day before, my dad threw them away! Waaa! And yes, I do find it annoyin to read my own comics, havin to scroll down the opening. It's more work to put in, so I don't think I'll put it in the next one. Wink
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Post by captincomcodyct-4056 Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:59 pm

i would like to see the star deystroyer vengence

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Post by Alpha Thu Oct 16, 2008 10:59 pm

Vengence? What's that?! I never made one.
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Post by DarthPineapple Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:13 am

Finally took the time to read it. If you don't resize your pics, that watch out you don't put any text in the right. Smile
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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:20 am

I really like it Alpha! The whole bridge is good, love the green!

I do think it need some higher walls though... and white-balance isn't the thing to use in this MOC.
Black construction paper or cloth would be good as a backdrop.
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Post by Alpha Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:13 am

I have no construction paper or any black cloth.
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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:44 am

You could always GIMP it.... Wink
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Post by Commander N09 Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:38 am

Nooo! I have failed! Darn procrastination! Well, not really. So I guess this means I CAN'T do my Corps project?
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Post by Karil Sat Oct 18, 2008 6:42 am

Nice job. I like your M6 droid. I would suggest better pics. But otherwise great work.
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Post by Alpha Sat Oct 18, 2008 3:44 pm

Commander N09 wrote:Nooo! I have failed! Darn procrastination! Well, not really. So I guess this means I CAN'T do my Corps project?

This happens AFTER Metalorn...
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