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101st battle over Rhen Var

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Post by -Aki- Thu Oct 23, 2008 5:37 pm

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Before I get a load of "OMFG U suck!", I know that the effects are crap, and that the vehicles aren't very good, but please ignore it, and enjoy.
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Post by astoriabluelegos Thu Oct 23, 2008 5:40 pm

Hey, that's pretty COOL actually! I especially liked the use of that Technic stopper for an escape pod, and the mini capital ships were cool too, NICE WORK! Smile Blue Arc
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Post by -Aki- Thu Oct 23, 2008 5:43 pm

astoriabluelegos wrote:Hey, that's pretty COOL actually! I especially liked the use of that Technic stopper for an escape pod, and the mini capital ships were cool too, NICE WORK! Smile Blue Arc

Thanks. Next stop, Metalorn!

By the way, here is a little note: You remember Frostika, with Aki? Well, I have changed the story, so now, Aki never existed.
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Post by astoriabluelegos Thu Oct 23, 2008 5:44 pm

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Thanks. Next stop, Metalorn!

By the way, here is a little note: You remember Frostika, with Aki? Well, I have changed the story, so now, Aki never existed.

Okay. Yeah Metalorn is AWESOME, even I'M being pulled into it's coolness! Razz Blue Arc


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Post by -Aki- Thu Oct 23, 2008 5:53 pm

And plus, like Joe said, it's a wasteland planet, so you have a excuse if you make something crap Laughing.
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Post by DarthPineapple Thu Oct 23, 2008 5:55 pm

Meh. The idea is nice but the ships are odd for some reason...
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Post by -Aki- Thu Oct 23, 2008 6:00 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Meh. The idea is nice but the ships are odd for some reason...

I know. I made them up.
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Post by Thunder-blade Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:57 pm

I really like it!! The ships are good and the GIMP effects were not too bad!!

I think the reasons the ships look a little non star wars is because they sorta look like Star Trek's ships....
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Post by Alpha Thu Oct 23, 2008 10:53 pm

Interesting. If you are doing Metalorn, be advised you are just doing recon, because we just won Metalorn over from the CIS. And to the MOC, nice work! The vehicles are meh, but atleast you make better explosions than I do! Wink
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Post by Clonecommando007 Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:03 pm

I liked the whole thing, and the ships were actually pretty nice. However, I would suggest, instead of using black tiles for space, that you use a black rug or blanket or something, so you don't have to cram all the ships together. Space battles are usually very seperated and ships engage from kilometers away from each other, not on top of each other like that. Wink
Good work! Just spread it out next time.
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Post by 80-0 Thu Oct 23, 2008 11:24 pm

Clonecommando007 wrote:I liked the whole thing, and the ships were actually pretty nice. However, I would suggest, instead of using black tiles for space, that you use a black rug or blanket or something, so you don't have to cram all the ships together. Space battles are usually very seperated and ships engage from kilometers away from each other, not on top of each other like that. Wink
Good work! Just spread it out next time.

Well, if you are making them that small having them two inches apart is hundreds of leagues in space. Razz

I like it! The ships look neat; an interesting way of making them, especially the smaller ones. I'd just suggest getting either a black rug as CC suggested or just getting more black plates. Wink
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