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2015 CSI 1: The sub-level killer. WARNING: very bloody!

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2015 CSI 1: The sub-level killer. WARNING: very bloody!

Post by -Aki- on Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:16 pm

Story: In the year 2015, London is in turmoil. A group of killers called The Hand have risen, and they are butchering everyone in their way.

Moc Story: By the looks of the killing, the worker was minding his own business. Then, a member of The Hand came behind him, the victim turned around, and was stabbed in the stomach, and left to rot. The sub-levels, already dangerous, have been made all the deadlier if The Hand are hiding there. Also, a military rifle was found lying nearby the body. Whenever this was dropped by the killer, or if the worker had somehow got his hands one one, is unknown.

Overview. As you can see, the victim is lying in a puddle of blood. When the body was taken for inspection, it was discovered that the knife has sliced through the intestine. So he must have died from loss of blood.

Without the body.



This is the first of my CSI series. I will be posting these often. Watch Out; the killings will get much bloodier than this!
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Post by DarthPineapple on Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:24 pm

Hmm... It's simple but effective. I like the wall!
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Post by -Aki- on Thu Oct 16, 2008 7:29 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Hmm... It's simple but effective. I like the wall!

Thanks! Took me ages to find all the blood and greebs!
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Post by Commander Mongoose on Thu Oct 16, 2008 8:28 pm

That's a knife sticking out, right? Good!
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Post by Zepher on Thu Oct 16, 2008 9:56 pm

Better than most of your work, well lit and lots of stuff! great job!
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Post by DarthPineapple on Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:16 am

Oh yea, it's good you followed my advise. Aren't these great replies just lots more of fun? However, I still think your #2 was made too fat. It could have easily been detailed as this one.
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Re: 2015 CSI 1: The sub-level killer. WARNING: very bloody!

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Oct 18, 2008 1:21 am

It looks good Aki! You are definitely improving!

Why are his pants mis-matched though?
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