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Street Patrol - Post Apocolyptic Vignette

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Street Patrol - Post Apocolyptic Vignette

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Oct 19, 2008 11:31 pm

This is my first try at post apocolyptic building. I love looking at others' post apoc stuff, so I tried my hand at my own.

I don't think it came out very post apocolyticy. Sad

Here it is. There are three N.P.U. (New Protective Union) Soldiers, one mounted, patroling the streets of the better off part of the city. Scroungers and Survivors hide behind the busted out walls of buildings, collecting scrap metal and food. Several are fighters - They're ready to defend themselves if need be.









You can check out the whole gallery Here.

Comments? Criticism? Suggestions for my next vignette?

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Re: Street Patrol - Post Apocolyptic Vignette

Post by Mike on Sun Oct 19, 2008 11:36 pm

I like the trash can and the spider detail. The green plant was supposed to be moss I assume? Smile
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Re: Street Patrol - Post Apocolyptic Vignette

Post by Darth Yoda on Mon Oct 20, 2008 12:01 am

Good job, may I suggest making the wall gray or light gray? it looks darker, and more scary. Wink
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Re: Street Patrol - Post Apocolyptic Vignette

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Oct 20, 2008 12:25 am

I agree with DY... darker colors make it look better.

I really like the yellow strips in the street! And the wall damage is awesome too!

Good job CC!
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Re: Street Patrol - Post Apocolyptic Vignette

Post by Axel on Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:54 am

THe white wall has to go. You'll be better off with a bley version instead. Otherwise, pretty good and simple, could do with some mroe greebles.
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Re: Street Patrol - Post Apocolyptic Vignette

Post by Clonecommando007 on Mon Oct 20, 2008 11:48 pm

I know I don't have many greebles on this scene, and I also realized that the wall, though fine for a regular scene, looks out of place in a post apocolyptic scene.

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