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The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

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The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Alpha on Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:11 am





















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GIMP'ing was a pain. Thanks to Legorevo for bringing the Droideka Design here, thanks again!

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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:21 am

Battle was pretty good...

Love the debris and all... but you do know they have the ellipse tool in GIMP right? Wink
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Alpha on Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:24 am

Yeah, I do. That's how I make the text.

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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Darth Yoda on Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:25 am

Roll Eyes I think your comics are getting a bit bland. (except for your droid destroyer) Smile It is just a bunch of wrecked pieces with a gray droid bp vehicle. I know you love gimp, but try not to make it the center of your story.... Wink
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Alpha on Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:27 am

I know, But there's not much you can do on Metalorn. Once we move on, they'll improve. Metalorn's just a wasteland, unless you want me to scrap almost all of my sets and place pieces from them there. In other words, just live with it. It'll change within a month, I plan to have the 44th move soon. Next time, I'll pick a marsh planet.

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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Darth Yoda on Mon Oct 20, 2008 3:29 am

It's good, I just think the purpose of the comic was to show the droid technique. Smile
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:10 am

What I meant about the ellipse tool Alpha is that you should have used it for the droideka's shield.
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by -Aki- on Mon Oct 20, 2008 5:27 pm

That was pretty cool! I like the ACT!
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Jedi Joe on Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:55 pm

I agree, it is a bit bland... But Metalorn is bland!

Very good comic, why does Arth's life suck though? Razz
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:57 pm

He's a Jedi general... that's sorta his job... Razz
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Jedi Joe on Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:58 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:He's a Jedi general... that's sorta his job... Razz

But man, he lost his padawan, and then he gets shot?!

And I thought Seph had a bad enough life by losing his arm... Razz
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Bly on Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:32 pm

Nice one! My only criticism is the skakoan's head - it really should be green. Oh, and how did you do the shielding effects?
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Oct 20, 2008 8:33 pm

He just use a circle and gave it a color balance...
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Alpha on Thu Oct 23, 2008 1:36 am

Also, this is the last of my MOCs for Metalorn. Joe is doing the last MOC on Metalorn, it will be good.

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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by Delta 77-Ponce on Thu Oct 23, 2008 1:50 am

Theese metalorn assaults are pretty good.
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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by 80-0 on Thu Oct 23, 2008 12:46 pm

commanderbly42 wrote:Nice one! My only criticism is the skakoan's head - it really should be green. Oh, and how did you do the shielding effects?

Not really; not all Skakoans are green. The 'head' is just a leather-like covering over the weaker inside-head which can't survive in a basic gravity-controlled environment.

So maybe this one isn't exactly Wat Tambor's best buddy and doesen't want to look like him. Razz

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Re: The Battle of Metalorn Part IV

Post by thunder-clone on Thu Oct 23, 2008 7:50 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:I agree, it is a bit bland... But Metalorn is bland!

Very good comic, why does Arth's life suck though? Razz

Yeah, he gets injured loads. I like the comic lots.
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