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727th Mission to Metalorn #3: Finishing Zorro

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Post by Jedi Joe Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:09 am

At last, Zorro has been crippled by the Republic!

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Post by astoriabluelegos Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:25 am

WOW! That's SO COOL! I love the Mini Acclamator and the mini Fortress! Hola Wow! Blue Arc
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Post by Thunder-blade Wed Oct 22, 2008 5:59 am

Nice trashcan!! Just kidding... I love how you did everything! But I think it would look better if you used another background... the stripes don't suit me...

Being the guru of GIMP Wink, I think your explosion could use some work... maybe some debris... and less smudge... don't worry, I am going to post a tutorial on doing explosions.. ;
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Post by cln-cmndo Wed Oct 22, 2008 1:02 pm

That is so cool! I love those effects! Hola Wow!
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Post by DarthPineapple Wed Oct 22, 2008 4:31 pm

Nice vig & Mini Acclamator! Smile
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Post by Clonecommando007 Thu Oct 23, 2008 1:21 am

That micro acclamator could use some work - as could the trashcan fortress, no offense.

Good try though!
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Post by J4ke Thu Oct 23, 2008 1:31 am

This slipped under my MOC-dar.

The acclamator is messy and bulky, and the use of a bin for a fortress is just daft. Microscale the fortress with cheese slopes and tiles and greebles. The acclamator itself needs the bridge and surrounding area smoothed out.

As for the terrain, ad some details. Put the fortress on a remote cliff, hidden in a valley, something imaginative...

So much can be done here, make it good! Smile
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