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The Leviathan

Post by Alpha on Fri Oct 24, 2008 1:52 am

The Leviathan was CIS General Alpha's personal Trakonsky Class Starfighter. Having received it from his father, Alpha used to fly around with it in his teenage years. Now, he has modified it, and put it back into shape. The Leviathan was retrieved by Grievous on Metalorn, after the Skirmish on Metalorn. After 4ABY, it was destroyed by Pirate forces.











Manufacturer: Kuat Drive Yards

Class: Trakonsky-33 Starfighter

Length: 6.5 meters

Shielding: Equipped

Targeting systems: Equipped

Navigation system: Equipped

Armament: 4 Fusion Blast Cannons

Crew: Pilot

Passengers: None



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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Mike on Fri Oct 24, 2008 1:56 am

I'm not quite sure why but when I first saw it, I though it was Non minifig scale! Laughing Anyhows, Instead of being sneaky and sliding it up without a piece Wink Might I suggest useing on of those pieces that flips it up?
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Oct 24, 2008 1:56 am

Awesome Alpha!!
Your MOCs are really improving!!

It looks kinda like a mini P-38!
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Alpha on Fri Oct 24, 2008 1:59 am

Mike888 wrote:I'm not quite sure why but when I first saw it, I though it was Non minifig scale! Laughing Anyhows, Instead of being sneaky and sliding it up without a piece Wink Might I suggest useing on of those pieces that flips it up?

Hmm? The last part didn't make sense, mind rephrasing/referencing your statement?

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Re: The Leviathan

Post by commander cody on Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:03 am

I kinda like it.

Admin - Cody, you need to have more constructive posts and COMPLY with the constitution! Five words minimum per post!!
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Alpha on Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:04 am

commander cody wrote:I kinda like it.

You know, you need to work on your posts. It's almost like spamming.

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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Mike on Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:11 am

Alpha wrote:
Mike888 wrote:I'm not quite sure why but when I first saw it, I though it was Non minifig scale! Laughing Anyhows, Instead of being sneaky and sliding it up without a piece Wink Might I suggest useing on of those pieces that flips it up?

Hmm? The last part didn't make sense, mind rephrasing/referencing your statement?

You know the pieces that flip the wingsheild in the Arc 170 fighter. The A wing. And a lot more? Wink
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Alpha on Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:11 am

Ah. Those. But if I used those, the cockpit would be way too high. Laughing

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Re: The Leviathan

Post by astoriabluelegos on Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:36 am

It looks great! Sorta reminiscent of Greviouse's Starfighter. Also it's sorta Ironic that a ship that small is named "Leviathan", since Leviathan usually means "big or large". Razz Blue Arc
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Oct 24, 2008 6:49 am

To true ABL, when i first saw the name I though it was another micro-star destroyer.... like in KoTOR...
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by DarthPineapple on Fri Oct 24, 2008 3:24 pm

Not really a good name, since it's the name of a capital ship.
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Rook on Fri Oct 24, 2008 4:57 pm

Looks good. Clean simple lines. Name is a little off but that's your call.

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Re: The Leviathan

Post by J4ke on Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:17 pm

Not bad, but get rid of the single piece cannons and make your own custom ones, sort out the rear of the cockpit, becasue it's strangely wobbley, and may be stregthn the eing connections to the body, as they look rather flimsy to me. All in all, it's rather good, even if the name doesn't quite fit...

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Post by 80-0 on Fri Oct 24, 2008 5:51 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:To true ABL, when i first saw the name I though it was another micro-star destroyer.... like in KoTOR...

Yeah; I remember that beast... Took down Taris, it did... Hola Wow!

Anyway, aside from the name it's really neat; it looks like a hybrid of the Utapauan P-38 and the Bellabub. Smile

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Re: The Leviathan

Post by cln-cmndo on Fri Oct 24, 2008 6:58 pm

I think it looks great! Smile
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by -Aki- on Fri Oct 24, 2008 7:12 pm

Looks really nice! You should really make a miniseries about Alpha.
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Clonecommando007 on Fri Oct 24, 2008 9:23 pm

Aki-kundu wrote:Looks really nice! You should really make a miniseries about Alpha.
A min iseries? Is that what you meant? Or did you mean minis eries?


This is actually very cool, it certainly looks like something a higher officer would fly.

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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Alpha on Fri Oct 24, 2008 11:09 pm

Meh, his story collides with the 44ths.

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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Axel on Sat Oct 25, 2008 3:00 am

It's good, but I don't really like the studdy space in front of the cockpit. Maybe a tile or two would smooth it out?
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Re:The Leviathan

Post by TK47 on Sun Oct 26, 2008 9:19 am

Good context, I can see some features in the ship that come from General Grievious's original ship.
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Re: The Leviathan

Post by Sialboats on Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:54 am

BRILLIANT!




I can't see any room for improvement on this one. Although in your description... it's confusing why Kuat Drive Yards would have manufactured a Seperatist vessel (yeah, I had to nitpick Wink ) .
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