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Original 541st Chronicles #9: First One In, Get the Lights

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Post by Sialboats Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:10 pm

Yes, not as good as my others, but I'm time starved Waaa! .

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(Yeah, I botched the explosion. I can do fire... but not booms.)

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Post by 80-0 Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:12 pm

Wow! I definitely like this one more than some of your other ones! Nice job, especially with the tan! Smile
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Post by Zepher Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:45 pm

Agreed, the scenery is really nice! I like the new guy. How 'bout adding in a Jedi soon? I mean, I know they can be boring, but just add one in for a few missions. And a evil general would be great!
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Post by Thunder-blade Mon Oct 27, 2008 10:48 pm

I love the scenery too! All the greebles were awesome! The attention to detail was astounding! Hola Wow!

But the hologram could look better...
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Post by legorevolution Mon Oct 27, 2008 11:00 pm

Wow sailboats, you've come a long way! The tan bricks in the sfx look great! Good storyline too but I agree, we need a jedi soon! Also the hologram looked a little 2D for my liking, try making it more 3D.
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Post by Alpha Mon Oct 27, 2008 11:05 pm

Wowz! This is the best one yet, I might have to use your cargo idea... Wink
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Post by ARC CloneTrooper141 Tue Oct 28, 2008 12:19 am

Man I love the awesome snow effect! great job! What kind of camera do you have? I really want to show the story of my legion but my camera is too crappy to take any pics...( thats why I haven't made any topics for the past couple of months to let you all know Wink )
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Post by Sialboats Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:26 am

ARC CloneTrooper141 wrote:Man I love the awesome snow effect! great job! What kind of camera do you have? I really want to show the story of my legion but my camera is too crappy to take any pics...( thats why I haven't made any topics for the past couple of months to let you all know Wink )

Thank you!

It's actually a cheapo-depot Kodak EasyShare C703. It's software sucks, so I just pull out the memory card with my pictures and upload them to me computer from there.
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Post by Garet6 Tue Oct 28, 2008 9:57 am

What is that underneath? A towel? It looks great! Laughing
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Post by 80-0 Tue Oct 28, 2008 12:39 pm

Garet6 wrote:What is that underneath? A towel? It looks great! Laughing

It would appear to be a quite fluffy, drycleaned towel. Razz
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Post by DarthPineapple Tue Oct 28, 2008 3:42 pm

I'm sure you already noticed your pictures are TOO big... Roll Eyes
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Post by cln-cmndo Tue Oct 28, 2008 3:55 pm

I think that is looks great! Hola Wow!
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Post by Comrade Faie Tue Oct 28, 2008 7:56 pm

The scenery is awesome! I like the snow effects too. Fordo Yo!
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Post by Sialboats Wed Oct 29, 2008 9:23 am

DarthPineapple wrote:I'm sure you already noticed your pictures are TOO big... Roll Eyes

Yeah, not much I can do about it... I'm sure you've heard Waaa! .
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Post by Jedi Joe Wed Oct 29, 2008 2:01 pm

I'm glad you worked on caption placing this time. A very nice improvement from your last comics! This is your best one yet!
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