Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

A small group of clones comes to the planet in an old gunship. The gunship is shot down on the fiery world, and burns in the lava. The 2 clones survive, but not for long...

Mongoose I am pretty sure you can't start the entry till November 1.....

It's nice though! lava is good and the platform looks nice too!

It's fine, thunder. He started it after I posted my topic.

It's pretty cool except that this will be disqualified for starting to build before your supposed to.

Edit- nvm

I stand corrected....

Good luck on the contest!


You'll need it going against me!

Clonecommando007 wrote:It's fine, thunder. He started it after I posted my topic.

So its not disqualified? And to TB, look at my amazing greebles!

Commander Mongoose wrote:

Clonecommando007 wrote:It's fine, thunder. He started it after I posted my topic.

So its not disqualified? And to TB, look at my amazing greebles!

Those greebles are not in the right place, they look like they were just stuck on randomly, but good job on the lava...

I was just rereading the title... ROFLOL!!

And I think the lava needs more trans-red/orange pieces... the Republic red isn't enough...

I'm not quite sure whats going on and the picture quality isn't brilliant but otherwise it looks very detailed, good use of imaganation.

This is OK. The greebs are a bit messy and the clones should be custom.

No they shouldn't be custom clones. Regular clones are fine. Anyway, the greebles aren't in the right spot; you should put fences on two sides and greeble under it. Add some black around the stand thing holding the platform up to represent the lava 'melting' it, and add some yellow and orange for texture.

Yes; regular clones should be used in expendable situations like this so you won't miss their awesomeness, just as long as you don't give them a BACKSTORY, AHEM, GEORGE.



Anyways, nice little vignette; so I assume the platform is about to break and they're all about to burn into shriveling plastic blobs?

Al Gore: PLASTIC blobs? Oh no, that would NOT help the environment. Take that vignette off at ONCE. You realize burning plastic causes trees to lose oxygen and shrivel up and die? Yes, it's true! Just take Leafy here: He's been growing for 279 years but because some stupid clone pilot who got hit with a missile in the cockpit crashed a gunship on a lava filled planet, he died. See what war does to the world? It KILLS.

JK!

Awesome! The pics are a bit blurry, though.