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Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

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Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Commander Mongoose on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:47 am

A small group of clones comes to the planet in an old gunship. The gunship is shot down on the fiery world, and burns in the lava. The 2 clones survive, but not for long...






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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:48 am

Mongoose I am pretty sure you can't start the entry till November 1.....

It's nice though! lava is good and the platform looks nice too!
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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Clonecommando007 on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:49 am

It's fine, thunder. He started it after I posted my topic.

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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Darth Yoda on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:50 am

It's pretty cool except that this will be disqualified for starting to build before your supposed to. Sad

Edit- nvm
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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:50 am

I stand corrected....

Good luck on the contest! Smile


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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Commander Mongoose on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:51 am

Clonecommando007 wrote:It's fine, thunder. He started it after I posted my topic.

So its not disqualified? And to TB, look at my amazing greebles!
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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Darth Yoda on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:54 am

Commander Mongoose wrote:
Clonecommando007 wrote:It's fine, thunder. He started it after I posted my topic.

So its not disqualified? And to TB, look at my amazing greebles!

Those greebles are not in the right place, they look like they were just stuck on randomly, but good job on the lava... Smile
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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Oct 31, 2008 5:27 am

I was just rereading the title... ROFLOL!! Razz

And I think the lava needs more trans-red/orange pieces... the Republic red isn't enough...
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Re:Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by TK47 on Fri Oct 31, 2008 9:03 am

I'm not quite sure whats going on and the picture quality isn't brilliant but otherwise it looks very detailed, good use of imaganation.
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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by -Aki- on Fri Oct 31, 2008 9:28 am

This is OK. The greebs are a bit messy and the clones should be custom.
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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Axel on Fri Oct 31, 2008 10:33 am

No they shouldn't be custom clones. Regular clones are fine. Anyway, the greebles aren't in the right spot; you should put fences on two sides and greeble under it. Add some black around the stand thing holding the platform up to represent the lava 'melting' it, and add some yellow and orange for texture.
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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by 80-0 on Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:20 pm

Yes; regular clones should be used in expendable situations like this so you won't miss their awesomeness, just as long as you don't give them a BACKSTORY, AHEM, GEORGE. Mad

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Anyways, nice little vignette; so I assume the platform is about to break and they're all about to burn into shriveling plastic blobs?

Al Gore: PLASTIC blobs? Oh no, that would NOT help the environment. Take that vignette off at ONCE. You realize burning plastic causes trees to lose oxygen and shrivel up and die? Yes, it's true! Just take Leafy here: He's been growing for 279 years but because some stupid clone pilot who got hit with a missile in the cockpit crashed a gunship on a lava filled planet, he died. See what war does to the world? It KILLS.

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Re: Battle of Watyacolit (For CC's contest)

Post by Jedi Joe on Fri Oct 31, 2008 1:13 pm

Awesome! The pics are a bit blurry, though.
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