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Hold the Bridge

Post by Thunder-blade on Sun Nov 02, 2008 3:02 am

Hold the Bridge







Without Figs

The 95th ARC Troopers have to hold the bridge on Hoth while holding off the CIS and their Mandalorian
commander. Waiting for the rest of their unit, they must protect the bridge from falling into CIS hands.
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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by Axel on Sun Nov 02, 2008 3:16 am

It's a bit plain, but where is it set? Rocky planet, or snowy terrain? The falling apart bridge is a good concept, but some more greebles on it would be a welcome relief. I guess the sheer size of the thing made it hard to add texture...
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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by ODST7 on Sun Nov 02, 2008 4:11 am

Axel wrote:It's a bit plain, but where is it set? Rocky planet, or snowy terrain? The falling apart bridge is a good concept, but some more greebles on it would be a welcome relief. I guess the sheer size of the thing made it hard to add texture...
Bahh its fine how it is. I like the concept and the arcs. Wink
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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by Jedi Joe on Sun Nov 02, 2008 5:30 am

I agree that it is plain, but I am not one to complain. Laughing

I still am amazed on how you made those customs, bravo!
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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Nov 02, 2008 7:55 am

The bridge is nice, but what about some buildings?
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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by flare on Sun Nov 02, 2008 12:02 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:The bridge is nice, but what about some buildings?

Yeah, maybe part of a wall that would belong to a building or something would be nice.
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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by Comrade Faie on Sun Nov 02, 2008 11:55 pm

What is a bridge doing in the middle of nowhere? Razz I like the MOC, why is there a bridge in the middle of nowhere? Fordo Yo!

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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by 80-0 on Mon Nov 03, 2008 12:45 am

Axel wrote:It's a bit plain, but where is it set? Rocky planet, or snowy terrain? The falling apart bridge is a good concept, but some more greebles on it would be a welcome relief. I guess the sheer size of the thing made it hard to add texture...

Pray read: It's Hoth. Wink



On the MOC: GAH! How come Mandalorians keep popping up for the CIS? I mean, %85 of them trained the dang clones, for pete's sake, even some in the Death Watch, like Isabet Reau and Dred Priest! Roll Eyes

Rant over.

Nice! I love the excess of SBDs, btw. Wink

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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Nov 03, 2008 2:58 am

Thanks 80-0, I do have 2 droid BP's so....

Thanks for all your comments! (Negative or otherwise Razz )

I will improve on it and add more greebles!
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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by Axel on Mon Nov 03, 2008 7:07 am

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:
Axel wrote:It's a bit plain, but where is it set? Rocky planet, or snowy terrain? The falling apart bridge is a good concept, but some more greebles on it would be a welcome relief. I guess the sheer size of the thing made it hard to add texture...

Pray read: It's Hoth. Wink

Ah, thanks. In that case, add some more 'fluff' to it somehow. I'm sure you'll find something on Brickshelf!
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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by J4ke on Mon Nov 03, 2008 1:54 pm

I'm not seeing the "falling apart" style, more like "messily constructed". Seriously, it looks like you just slapped some bricks together, try buidling a bridge first and then systematically destroying it...

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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by 80-0 on Mon Nov 03, 2008 2:07 pm

J4ke wrote:I'm not seeing the "falling apart" style, more like "messily constructed". Seriously, it looks like you just slapped some bricks together, try buidling a bridge first and then systematically destroying it...

I don't see that.

But then again I'm not from FBTB and therefore I'm a noob. Roll Eyes

It may not be OMG SUPER HIGH QUALITY like Chuck, but it looks broken. The white plates spread along it represent feathery snow dusting on the bridge. The cracked grey parts represent the bridge falling off at the adjoining point. Not merely cracking due to stress via a level restrainment, rather seperating from the rest of the mainframe and falling to the ground.

Just because you think you're teh el haxxors of the internet and he's omfg dum noobz lolz... Oh nevermind. I always get caught up defending people... And I don't know why... Roll Eyes

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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by Thunder-blade on Mon Nov 03, 2008 4:36 pm

That's OK 80-0... I want to take constructive criticism, I mean it's best to learn from someone who knows better right?

And actually your comment helped me 80-0... I can't believe I forgot to add bridge pieces on the ground!!
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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by Zepher on Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:43 pm

Can't belive that I haven't commented yet, I've looked at it twice. I really like it, and the first pic is really nice. I personally think the broken bridge effects very well done, though there's a few wierdly placed trianglular pieces.
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cool

Post by burningottsel on Thu Apr 09, 2009 11:27 am

This is so cool. If I was one of those clones I'd be seriously pissing my white clad armour

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Re: Hold the Bridge

Post by rc-1798 on Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:16 pm

It looks really good! It really captures the action that the ARCs get. Blue Arc


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