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Post by bedaho on Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:32 pm

Yeah. I couldn't come up with a title.
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A platoon of clones has been dispatched to break in to a secret CIS bunker on Dathomir and capture a Banking Clan leader. The platoon split up into several groups which subsequently became lost as Sepratist jamming caused their navigation equiptment to malfunction. One group stumbled across the concealed below ground exit of the bunker. Hoping that the CIS won't expect an attack from their emergency back door, the group prepares to assault the bunker. (there are more than two clones in the group.)

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I hope I didn't over do it with the greebles. It's my first time trying it...
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Post by Zepher on Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:33 pm

Don't like the mixed colors, but I know you can't do anything about it! Other than that it's really great!
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Post by Darth Yoda on Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:35 pm

One word... greebles. Shocked I agree with zeph, take out the big brown piece and ladder... Good detail. Smile
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Post by 80-0 on Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:37 pm

Greebles ahoy! Hola Wow!

I say it adds to it, anyhow.

The old grey actually is good; it denotes age, considering this facility seems to be old and rusty. Wink

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Post by bedaho on Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:39 pm

Thanks guys. I think Zeph meant bley/grey. The brown is supposed to be rock because they're underground.
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Post by 80-0 on Sat Nov 08, 2008 8:41 pm

Ah, well, that part yes. But the ladder could be a rusty old thing because it is mainly underground where it's liable to get wet. Wink

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Post by Axel on Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:02 am

One of the few examples where old grey actually looks good when used with bley pieces. Nice greebles, although I would've preferred it if you had used some horizontal greebles instead of all vertical greebles.
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Post by 80-0 on Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:15 am

Well, he did put that sort of sewer cover on the ground. Other than that for a vignette you can't do much greebling horizontally. Wink

But maybe something stuck to the ceiling on the lower floor?

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Post by Darth Yoda on Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:21 am

Can we have a pic of what the very top looks like? Smile
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Post by 80-0 on Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:23 am

I agree; I see what looks like a little old grey spoked wheel up there; let's see it!

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Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Nov 12, 2008 12:29 am

This looks awesome!! The grey/bley mixing looks very nice too! And I agree, the ladder should be gray...

Good Work! The only thing I don't like is that it's better than my entry!! Razz
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