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Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

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Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

Post by Darth Yoda on Mon Nov 10, 2008 4:59 am

As I was thinking about my new legion I thought that my two jedi who will be revealed tomorrow should have a special starfighter for themselves. This speedster can fit both jedi, and lots of cargo. Although it is a bit bigger than most jedi starfighters it makes up for its size with heavy firepower, speed, and the most powerful weapon: These two jedi's minds. Shocked
Here it is:



The cockpit

The cargo hold with the top off...


Tell me what you think! Smile
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Post by fjords94 on Mon Nov 10, 2008 6:10 am

I like it a lot, the shape is really cool and it's got kind of a CIS color scheme. The only thing I would work on would be the nose, it's kind of too blocky but just a more rounded shape would make it great.
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Post by Sialboats on Mon Nov 10, 2008 10:30 am

Holy Batman Greebles!

Very good shape, slightly blocky, and I'm finding that ETA canopy to be a bit cliche now. Like Fjord said, make it more Republicy in color Smile !
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Post by Rook on Mon Nov 10, 2008 1:40 pm

I like the storage units.

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Re: Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

Post by J4ke on Mon Nov 10, 2008 2:17 pm

Not bad at all, I really like the wings. However, that nose needs to be killed. With fire. It's too bulky, so replace it with curved wedges, for example 6x2 curves. The rear is detailed, but rather bulky too. However, the functionality of this makes up for it.

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Re: Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

Post by DarthPineapple on Mon Nov 10, 2008 4:14 pm

The cargo hold is nice, but... do... not... use... both... greys! It's really awkward. Sad
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Post by TK47 on Mon Nov 10, 2008 4:17 pm

Very well done, looks like you have a good insight into bricks, although the basic outline is a little odd.
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Post by 667thLegion on Mon Nov 10, 2008 9:25 pm

As some have said already, get rid of the Eta-2 canopy. I know since there are two pilots it might be a bit hard to change that, but that's the only bad thing about it! great job again! :grin:
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Re: Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

Post by Jedi Joe on Mon Nov 10, 2008 10:32 pm

I like the Eta 2 canopy actually. It adds a nice flow to it! Good work on the ship, I can't wait to see a V2!
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Post by Clonecommando007 on Mon Nov 10, 2008 11:02 pm

Like the Greebles and the snot'd wing, as well as all the storage inside. Don't really like the nose.

And it does look CISy. Good work though!

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Post by noobswatter on Mon Nov 10, 2008 11:23 pm

Nice , exept i don't like the idea of a single cockpit for 2 people. -And the cargo hold is a little......stuffed don't you think? Yellow
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Post by Bantha on Mon Nov 10, 2008 11:24 pm

Nice idea. I love the greeble. Smile
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Re: Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

Post by legorevolution on Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:19 am

The storage bins are a very good idea. I never expected it as I scrolled down. You did a good job with the angles of the ship and blending things together. My only complaints are that you need that stripe to come down the front of the nose (or at lease a little more cis blue there) and perhaps a stripe or something blue on the wings? Landing gear?
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Re: Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

Post by Darth Yoda on Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:22 am

legorevolution wrote:The storage bins are a very good idea. I never expected it as I scrolled down. You did a good job with the angles of the ship and blending things together. My only complaints are that you need that stripe to come down the front of the nose (or at lease a little more cis blue there) and perhaps a stripe or something blue on the wings? Landing gear?

Thanks, oh, and a V2 shall come to you guys shortly... Smile
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Re: Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

Post by legorevolution on Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:31 am

darth yoda wrote:
legorevolution wrote:The storage bins are a very good idea. I never expected it as I scrolled down. You did a good job with the angles of the ship and blending things together. My only complaints are that you need that stripe to come down the front of the nose (or at lease a little more cis blue there) and perhaps a stripe or something blue on the wings? Landing gear?

Thanks, oh, and a V2 shall come to you guys shortly... Smile

Yee! I'll be quietly stalking the cabg forums until you post...
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Re: Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Nov 11, 2008 11:33 pm

Looks good DY! The SNOT looks awesome!!
And the nose does need improvement... but I happen to like the Eta-2 cockpit...
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Re: Kanye, and ozara's starfighter

Post by LegoBoyRobert on Wed Nov 12, 2008 1:01 am

Dy, I see you put a lot of time in to this; and it looks great! Nice gleebles, too. Smile

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