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541st Chronicles #10: Disabled Defenses

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541st Chronicles #10: Disabled Defenses

Post by Sialboats on Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:30 am

Yes, I know it's pretty bad (gah, just aweful in fact) in comparison to my other ones, but the next one will be a helluva lot better Smile . A little rusty on the sizing and posistioning, and haven't had a lot of time to build a more comprehensive set. But bear with me Razz .

Since it's been a while: Previous Comic .















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Post by Commander Mongoose on Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:31 am

Wow, that was really great. A little more white bricks would be good.
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Post by legorevolution on Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:33 am

Awesome. I like the gun at the beginning of the story, but I think it needs a few more slopes/greebles. The droid with the jetpack and gun on his arm was sweet too. Did you have to cut or mod the arm to enable the technic pin to fit on?
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Post by Sialboats on Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:34 am

legorevolution wrote: Did you have to cut or mod the arm to enable the technic pin to fit on?

I did have to cut the arm, but that arm was broken prior to that anyways Wink .
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Post by legorevolution on Tue Nov 11, 2008 1:39 am

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legorevolution wrote: Did you have to cut or mod the arm to enable the technic pin to fit on?

I did have to cut the arm, but that arm was broken prior to that anyways Wink .

I guess that can justify that then. The arm would just have to be thrown out anyways. Looks good.
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Re: 541st Chronicles #10: Disabled Defenses

Post by Zepher on Tue Nov 11, 2008 3:02 am

This one was a let down from your others. There was no meat to the battle. I liked the first four, they lead into eachother. Try that again. I'd also love to see the troop that landed in one of them as a third character, the guy in yellow, you know?
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Post by Sialboats on Tue Nov 11, 2008 10:12 am

Zepher wrote:I'd also love to see the troop that landed in one of them as a third character, the guy in yellow, you know?

He is a third character, in fact. Although I really haven't had much of a chance to elaborate on him... planning to do some of that with this next one. Character progression, and the introduction of the Seps Wink .


But, I just needed to tie up the battle real quickly. Time's been scarce lately Mad .
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Post by DarthPineapple on Tue Nov 11, 2008 3:46 pm

It's nice, although the pictures are too big again ( Mad ) The text on the last one disappears.
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Post by TK47 on Tue Nov 11, 2008 4:49 pm

Awsome, great setting and effects I can't wait to see more.
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Re: 541st Chronicles #10: Disabled Defenses

Post by thunder-clone on Tue Nov 11, 2008 4:58 pm

Very good, the setting and the effects were great as normal. Keep up the great work. A toast! 😁
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Post by thunder-clone on Tue Nov 11, 2008 4:58 pm

Very good, the setting and the effects were great as normal. Keep up the great work. A toast! 😁
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