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541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

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541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Sialboats on Sat Nov 15, 2008 4:27 pm

It's a longer one, 14 panes over the normal 9-10. Didn't feel that I could halve it into two different comics Smile .





































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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Zepher on Sat Nov 15, 2008 4:34 pm

Well, this has got to be the first epicose about character only. And I love it. Other may complain it needs action, but that's never a problem for me. It also sets up so much, and goes even further into his past.
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Nov 15, 2008 4:59 pm

Looks great. Get rid of the yellow face though. it looks ugly with the flesh ones. Surprised
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Zepher on Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:03 pm

That's true, but it didn't stand out now that I think of it, and it's to late to change. Just make him a slightly different spiecies!
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:08 pm

Nice! I really like the beginning!!

But isn't "clicks" spelled klicks??
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Commander Four on Sat Nov 15, 2008 5:25 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Nice! I really like the beginning!!

But isn't "clicks" spelled klicks??
Yeah.It is. Klicks is spelled klicks.
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Nov 15, 2008 6:51 pm

I like it! It goes to show you that Grievous isn't the only grumpy CIS General! Razz
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Delta 77-Ponce on Sat Nov 15, 2008 8:27 pm

Wait why does some of the comics titles say original chronicles and some don't??
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Sialboats on Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:04 pm

Delta 77-Ponce wrote:Wait why does some of the comics titles say original chronicles and some don't??

I forgot to put it.... Razz, I quickly found though that my title couldn't be as long as I would like it though.
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by thunder-clone on Sun Nov 16, 2008 10:53 am

Delta please put in 5 words. Other than that I like the comic and can't wait for the next one.
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Re:541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by TK47 on Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:40 pm

He saluted with his left hand?If it was a salute, great story anyway and you've got a nice setting going there.
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by 80-0 on Sun Nov 16, 2008 3:08 pm

'Course he s'luted with 'is left 'and; CIS people 'r leftists; Communists. 't's quite simple when y'get right down t'it. Wink

How's that for his accent? Razz

Very nice work; I'm enjoying them more and more! Smile

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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Nov 16, 2008 7:14 pm

Lots of positive diologue! I really liked the first part in particular. The detail was great and the anger of the officer clearly showed by having him knock down his caf. Nice!

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Post by delta-98 on Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:42 am

I love your series!!! It's so awsome!! WOOHOO Blue Arc

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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Gerrard on Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:35 am

You're doing great with this Sialboats! Nice one!
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Re: 541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

Post by Sialboats on Sun Mar 08, 2009 10:03 am

Gerrard wrote:You're doing have done great with this Sialboats! Nice one!

Wink

This is.. like... three months old, Gerrard...

Bump much Razz ?
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