Blaze Alone
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DarthPineapple
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Blaze Alone
CIS commando: Auurgh!
Blaze: That is what you get for scratching my armour!
Story: commander Blaze and Blaze's finest are doing some lone recon on the planet of Mustafar. However, soon Blaze gets lost. As he explores the platforms, he gets ambushed by a CIS commando. However, it was on this day Thomson learned that there is nothing a Vibroblade can't do
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Behind the scenes: I had a lot of fun making this. This was just a experiment with lava, and also testing out these cool new knives. This was going to be my entry to the Lost Unit contest, but I am entering something else instead.
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Blaze Alone
Wow! Nice!
The blood isn't too exasturbated, the knife is nice, the commando looks good(nice use of the A-Team head on custom clone armor ), and you captured the multicoloredness and viscuousity of the lava quite excellently.
The blood isn't too exasturbated, the knife is nice, the commando looks good(nice use of the A-Team head on custom clone armor ), and you captured the multicoloredness and viscuousity of the lava quite excellently.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
Re: Blaze Alone
It's pretty good, although a few things are a bit odd.
The CIS commando is human?
As for the Lava, get rid of the fla,e or just build a lot of it. The one you have looks out of place. Get rid of the trans red slope as well.
The CIS commando is human?
As for the Lava, get rid of the fla,e or just build a lot of it. The one you have looks out of place. Get rid of the trans red slope as well.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
Re: Blaze Alone
DarthPineapple wrote:It's pretty good, although a few things are a bit odd.
The CIS commando is human?
As for the Lava, get rid of the fla,e or just build a lot of it. The one you have looks out of place. Get rid of the trans red slope as well.
Well sure; the CIS is always ready to recruit quality assistance.
About the flame, I'd say it looks fine. The lava constantly has oxygen bubbles bursting causing lava to spit up like that, and the red slope looks like the lava is slopping up on the platform.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
Re: Blaze Alone
CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:DarthPineapple wrote:It's pretty good, although a few things are a bit odd.
The CIS commando is human?
As for the Lava, get rid of the fla,e or just build a lot of it. The one you have looks out of place. Get rid of the trans red slope as well.
Well sure; the CIS is always ready to recruit quality assistance.
About the flame, I'd say it looks fine. The lava constantly has oxygen bubbles bursting causing lava to spit up like that, and the red slope looks like the lava is slopping up on the platform.
I added that because some blood must have spurted out of the CIS commando, and it hit the lava. What do you think of the quote?
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: Blaze Alone
The title seems alot like my vig title....
Anyway, you are getting better Aki!
Blazer is nice and so is the vig!
Anyway, you are getting better Aki!
Blazer is nice and so is the vig!
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Thunder-blade wrote:The title seems alot like my vig title....
Anyway, you are getting better Aki!
Blazer is nice and so is the vig!
Thanks! His name is Blazee by the way !
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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WOW Aki! You're improving and FAST, this vig looks great!!!
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 34
Location : Oregon
Re: Blaze Alone
I genereally don't comment on your MOCs (just don't, sorry) but this one is showing that you are certainly improving.
Re: Blaze Alone
Nice. I see you improved Blaze, I like him!
Onto the vig, nice work! I love the lava effects!
Onto the vig, nice work! I love the lava effects!
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 28
Re: Blaze Alone
Thanks for the kind words everyone! I have changed my mind, and I am entering this into the contest!
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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