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Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

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Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

Post by -Aki- on Thu Nov 20, 2008 6:04 pm

He sprinted fast, across the blood red soil,
Which once was the ground for a world of toil
Thanks to his training, he didn't run out of breath,
In his past, he had only known death.

Seeing his family killed turned him mad,
As he witness the killer behead his lad.
Still now, he continued to feel pain,
But now to him, life is just a game.

As the crimson sun set over the hills,
He started to think about todays kills.
"Still, there will be more to kill tommorow"
He is the wanderer, the bringer of sorrow.



I know that was crap, but here is the pic.


Sorry for the lack of pics, I will take some more soon.
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Post by DarthPineapple on Thu Nov 20, 2008 6:30 pm

I like the gun but the body and legs are ugly. Ah well it's sharpie. That explains it. Sad
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Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

Post by astoriabluelegos on Thu Nov 20, 2008 7:57 pm

The poem was great, and I liked the way you made him looked "scuffed up" Nice work! Smile Blue Arc


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Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

Post by Thunder-blade on Thu Nov 20, 2008 9:50 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:I like the gun but the body and legs are ugly. Ah well it's sharpie. That explains it. Sad

That's where you're wrong DP! Sharpie doesn't always look bad! Mad Razz

ABL wrote:The poem was great, and I lied the way you made him looked "scuffed up" Nice work! Smile Blue Arc

Lied? Razz

Nice work Aki! It looks pretty good!
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Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

Post by Axel on Fri Nov 21, 2008 6:52 am

Legs are a bit off, but the torso looks very nice. Head would've worked fine without adding Sharpie marks to it.
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Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

Post by 80-0 on Fri Nov 21, 2008 3:53 pm

I agree with Axel regarding the head; the blood is a little too bright. Dark red anyone?

And the legs are a little blubby. Razz

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Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

Post by DarthPineapple on Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:33 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:That's where you're wrong DP! Sharpie doesn't always look bad! Mad Razz

No, 1 out of 50 figs is good... and this one isn't that one. Sad
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Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:36 pm

And where did you come out with that statistic? Razz

Just messing with ya... I do actually think that most Sharpie jobs don't end up great... that's why mine are so special! Razz
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Post by DarthPineapple on Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:39 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:And where did you come out with that statistic? Razz

Just messing with ya... I do actually think that most Sharpie jobs don't end up great... that's why mine are so special! Razz

I think using sharpie on a Lego fig is cheap and ugly. (no offense)
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Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:40 pm

Well it's cheap... I'll give you that... but it's not always ugly...
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Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

Post by DarthPineapple on Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:44 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Well it's cheap... I'll give you that... but it's not always ugly...

As I said, it's most of the time, but not always. Wink
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Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:48 pm

Yeah I know...

ANYWAYS... let's get back on topic before a Mod sees us!

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Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

Post by DarthPineapple on Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:55 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Yeah I know...

ANYWAYS... let's get back on topic before a Mod sees us!

Razz

It's actually on topic because we're discussing an aspect of this Minifig MOC. Wink
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Re: Post apoc soldier (With short poem)

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Nov 21, 2008 4:58 pm

True... but we are more talking about the Sharpies and minifigs...

But if we can talk about it... then argue away! Razz
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