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727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Jedi Joe on Fri Nov 21, 2008 8:05 pm

Turmoil has struck on Metalorn! General Grievous has given his flagship, the Fireflight to the CIS mastermind, Alpha. The Republic almost had Alpha but he ran away to Dantooine. The 727th camped in a rocky area, hoping to find information there...





























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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Commander Four on Fri Nov 21, 2008 8:28 pm

Hmm....that gunner helmet looks kinda like what I use for 102nd Airborne helmet except for the visor and life support tubes. great job on the comic though!
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by flare on Fri Nov 21, 2008 8:48 pm

Hmm...Not bad....But I would I think an scouting outpost/front line post should be a little bigger and a little more cover....

But I like it over all Smile
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by astoriabluelegos on Fri Nov 21, 2008 9:15 pm

Looks great! I love what you used for a tent! great WORK! Smile Blue Arc
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Thunder-blade on Fri Nov 21, 2008 11:13 pm

Not bad! I like the SFX in this one!! The lasers and the color change was nice!!

Though I don't like how he always calls them grunts... Razz
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by flare on Fri Nov 21, 2008 11:35 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:
Though I don't like how he always calls them grunts... Razz

they are real people inside, they have feeling of there own...Even though only thing "take commands and follow them".

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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Brandon9 on Fri Nov 21, 2008 11:56 pm

great comic, but droids don't have souls. Razz Fordo Yo!


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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by 80-0 on Sat Nov 22, 2008 12:49 am

Brandon9 wrote:great comic, but droids don't have souls. Razz Fordo Yo!

Good point, good point! That's why Commandos hate them. They can't feel pain. Razz

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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Nov 22, 2008 1:13 am

Thunder-blade wrote:Not bad! I like the SFX in this one!! The lasers and the color change was nice!!

Though I don't like how he always calls them grunts... Razz

Well tell that to Tornado himself. That is his preference.
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Nov 22, 2008 8:30 am

I suggest making a real landscape. yes that includes a baseplate and some decent MOC's. I can't really say this kind of 'base' is Sci-fi. Sad
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Post by thunder-clone on Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:49 am

Nice tent, gunner looks good, and really good comic. Fordo Yo!
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Nov 22, 2008 3:41 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:I suggest making a real landscape. yes that includes a baseplate and some decent MOC's. I can't really say this kind of 'base' is Sci-fi. Sad

It's supposed to be a small camp. Not a huge outpost.
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by DarthPineapple on Sat Nov 22, 2008 3:54 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:
DarthPineapple wrote:I suggest making a real landscape. yes that includes a baseplate and some decent MOC's. I can't really say this kind of 'base' is Sci-fi. Sad

It's supposed to be a small camp. Not a huge outpost.

But it doesn't really look like a small camp either. Sad
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Zepher on Sat Nov 22, 2008 4:47 pm

Ever played Starcraft? This is a lot like a scene in it.

I like the idea, but it could of used a bit more.
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Nov 22, 2008 4:49 pm

Yeah I agree it was a bit plain...

I think it would be more realistic if you had a short wall of some sort, and the clones are sleeping behind it...

I don't think there were tents in Star Wars...
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Sat Nov 22, 2008 5:13 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:I don't think there were tents in Star Wars...
Well, it shows up a few times in a Wookieepedia search, and it'd be weird if they never figured out that hanging some material over a simple frame makes a shelter. Razz

EDIT: Dayum, that's gotta be at least the third new page I've started in the last 24 hours...
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Nov 22, 2008 5:33 pm

Hmmm... I stand corrected then...

(I was actually anticipating to be whacked with a tent article on Wookieepedia... Laughing )
I think the Indy tent would look better though..
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:12 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Hmmm... I stand corrected then...

(I was actually anticipating to be whacked with a tent article on Wookieepedia... Laughing )
I think the Indy tent would look better though..

What if...

*GASP*

I don't have the Indy tent? Hola Wow!


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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Alpha on Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:14 pm

Yeah... it's not like we can go to Bircklink and buy whatever pieces/sets we want at anytime... atleast for me...

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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Nov 22, 2008 6:24 pm

Well I don't buy of BL either...

I was just suggesting that you use an Indy tent... it's not like you are gonna revise this MOC in the future or anything...
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Sialboats on Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:31 pm

Needs a whole lot more legos, more tinnies, and some better lines. It's a good start, though, and a helluva lot better than my first Smile !




Thunder-blade wrote:I don't think there were tents in Star Wars...



A camp, circa 1 ABY Wink .
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Jedi Joe on Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:33 pm

Sialboats wrote:Needs a whole lot more legos, more tinnies, and some better lines. It's a good start, though, and a helluva lot better than my first Smile !.

Don't worry, there will be more in the next one. Those were just two scouts. Wink
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:43 pm

Hey Joe, that pic that Sial posted is actually a good reference!
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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by 80-0 on Sat Nov 22, 2008 10:23 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:
Thunder-blade wrote:Not bad! I like the SFX in this one!! The lasers and the color change was nice!!

Though I don't like how he always calls them grunts... Razz

Well tell that to Tornado himself. That is his preference.

His loss. If he meets Sergeant Kal he'll have hell to pay. Wink

But alas! Not all sergeants are like Kal, and the one who raised him no doubt didn't have Kal's ideals in mind.

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Re: 727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Post by Thunder-blade on Sat Nov 22, 2008 10:25 pm

Well that was the clone commandos...

But yeah... it would be nice to have some more Mando influence in the clones...
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