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727th Mission on Dantooine #2: The Rough Journey

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Post by Jedi Joe Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:31 pm

NOTE: I am taking a break from comics for a while, so don't get angry. Razz

The 727th, after a Seperatist attack was not able to contact the Republic. They had to scout around, and they found a CIS turret, which led them to believe that Alpha's bunker was near. They could complete the mission after all...

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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:33 pm

Kinda short... and NO GIMPing at all!! Razz

But seriously... this is not all that great... I mean the "vig" is plain, and there is no dialogue...

The turret looks a bit odd...
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Post by Jedi Joe Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:35 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:Kinda short... and NO GIMPing at all!! Razz

But seriously... this is not all that great... I mean the "vig" is plain, and there is no dialogue...

The turret looks a bit odd...

I guess you didn't read the note on top of the post.

The turret was inspired by some old Sci-Fi movies.
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Post by Thunder-blade Sun Nov 23, 2008 5:52 pm

I did, but I (wrongly) assumed that you meant "after" this comic...
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Post by Alpha Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:52 pm

Yeah, Legorev doesn't use dialog or GIMP anymore. Neither will I, they're supposed to be MOCs, not comics.

Nice work, that turret looks like the one from Republic Commando!
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Post by Comrade Faie Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:14 pm

Too short and plain. I agree with what T-B says. Fordo Yo!
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Post by Jedi Joe Sun Nov 23, 2008 7:24 pm

Commander Faie wrote:Too short and plain. I agree with what T-B says. Fordo Yo!

Well, what do you expect from the rocky plains? Razz
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Post by Darth Yoda Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:26 pm

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Commander Faie wrote:Too short and plain. I agree with what T-B says. Fordo Yo!

Well, what do you expect from the rocky plains? Razz

Maybe some rocks? Seriously it's just a tan base plate with three plants, and a undersized turret... Wink
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Post by Jedi Joe Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:27 pm

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Commander Faie wrote:Too short and plain. I agree with what T-B says. Fordo Yo!

Well, what do you expect from the rocky plains? Razz

Maybe some rocks? Seriously it's just a tan base plate with three plants, and a undersized turret... Wink

Ah well, my next vig is gonna be awesome! Wink
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Post by Darth Yoda Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:29 pm

Okay, looking forward to it. And remember, take your time.
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Post by DarthPineapple Mon Nov 24, 2008 2:48 pm

Like yoda said, take your time. It seems you rushed through this. Sad
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