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Alzoc III - Elicit

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Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by Alpha on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:25 am













Creator's Note
Aight. I know it's short, I'm sorry. But the next one will be longer. And filled with more action. Also, the reason why it's so dark is because I took pics around 4:45-ish, and I wanted a dark scene. The next one'll be much better! Waaa!

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Post by Mike on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:30 am

The darkness and the towel really add to it!

But you should have just done the entire thing on one baseplate. It looks rather bare.
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Post by Alpha on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:31 am

Yeah, but I don't have a white baseplate, or an unlimited amount of white pieces. And I agree with you, I was originally going to add a Bunker, but I decided against it. Mad

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Re: Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by Alpha on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:36 am

Sorry for double post, but thanks to Sial for the towel idea! Wink

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Post by Commander Mongoose on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:36 am

Spray paint! It really works! Try it! NOW! Ehh, comic is a little skechy, needs more depth and explanation.
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Re: Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by Alpha on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:42 am

True. Although, the main focus was the battle. And the Plasma Launcher.

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Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:18 am

Looks good Alpha! The Octuparra droid looks sweet in action!

The "snow" looks good, but why is their a "bridge" if they can just walk in the snow??
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Post by Jedi Joe on Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:21 am

You guys get pissed at me for making a plain vig but you praise Alpha now?

Anyways Alpha, a bit plain, but really sets the scene. Good work! Smile
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Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:24 am

Let's look at it this way Joe...

Did you have GIMP effects? No
Did you use a cool landscape? No

And the last one, Alpha used different "views" for this comic, he didn't just switch up the angle of sight on the same MOC.
He made several MOCs...
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Re: Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by Alpha on Tue Nov 25, 2008 5:28 am

Thunder-blade wrote:Looks good Alpha! The Octuparra droid looks sweet in action!

The "snow" looks good, but why is their a "bridge" if they can just walk in the snow??

Technically a walkway. It was going to be a broken bridge, but I scrapped the idea.

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Post by 80-0 on Tue Nov 25, 2008 1:43 pm

Jedi Joe wrote:You guys get pissed at me for making a plain vig but you praise Alpha now?

Anyways Alpha, a bit plain, but really sets the scene. Good work! Smile

That was Jake and he's allowed to. Razz

Plus, it's a towel. Wink

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Post by Jeremy012399 on Tue Nov 25, 2008 8:57 pm

I like it a lot, it was not your best work (just because it was short). great job A toast!

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Post by Delta 77-Ponce on Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:02 pm

No offense but your some of your stories are like out of order and how they get on that planet???
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Re: Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by Alpha on Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:23 pm

Delta 77-Ponce wrote:No offense but your some of your stories are like out of order and how they get on that planet???

What do you mean, how'd they get here? They got here by a Venator. Roll Eyes

And they're out of order because? Any reason why? Surprised

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Re: Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by Sialboats on Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:25 pm

The luminosity on those bolts Shocked , can't quite get anything like it!

And that Ocuputarra is epic! I've been having a hard time working out the smaller anti-infantry varient of it.


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Re: Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by Alpha on Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:25 pm

Actually, the Octuptarra fetured is minifig scale. Shocked Laughing

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Post by Sialboats on Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:26 pm

Alpha wrote:Actually, the Octuptarra fetured is minifig scale. Shocked Laughing

Thats... what I was saying... :scratch:
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Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Nov 26, 2008 7:01 am

Nice ground cover! No really, it really looks like snow or some sort.
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Re: Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by Sialboats on Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:13 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Nice ground cover! No really, it really looks like snow or some sort.

Now why was I never lauded for that Razz ?
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Re: Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by vecol05 on Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:00 pm

Its kinda plain dont you think.
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Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:01 pm

vecol05 wrote:Its kinda plain dont you think.

:D'oh: Why don't you use a question mark?!
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Re: Alzoc III - Elicit

Post by Alpha on Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:02 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:
vecol05 wrote:Its kinda plain dont you think.

Wow this thing looks'oh: Why don't you use a question mark?!

Because he was not a very good student in Elementary, and didn't pay attention to the grammar lessons. Razz

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Post by 80-0 on Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:37 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:
vecol05 wrote:Its kinda plain dont you think.

Wow this thing looks'oh: Why don't you use a question mark?!

I swear DP, someone bugged your profile to disable that smiley. Laughing

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Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Nov 26, 2008 4:56 pm

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:
DarthPineapple wrote:
vecol05 wrote:Its kinda plain dont you think.

Wow this thing looks'oh: Why don't you use a question mark?!

I swear DP, someone bugged your profile to disable that smiley. Laughing

I don't know, it works in quotes for me though! Laughing
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Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Nov 26, 2008 5:22 pm

Dang... that is weird DP....

Maybe there's a limit or something that you can use smiles... Wink
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