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Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:49 am

I am not satisfied with this MOC I whipped up in about an hour...





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I am only satisfied with the front, the tri-guns look sweet I must say...

The rest is a tad boxy... and plain...

Any Ideas??
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Commander Mongoose on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:52 am

Wings. Missles, and a hook in the back to load cargo.
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Alpha on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:56 am

Needs wings. And possible some missles. Also, the red cockpit kinda stands out, you might wanna replace it with the ETA-2 Cockpit.

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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:58 am

Nah, I like the cockpit, it gives it a better flow....

Does anyone have an idea where to put the wings?? Because I don't have a clue...

Oh, and I scrapped my 95th Landing craft for this..
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Zepher on Tue Nov 25, 2008 2:59 am

I really love the front, great job so far!
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Alpha on Tue Nov 25, 2008 3:02 am



Aight. The wings could use some flick-fire missles. Put them in the back of the gunship.
Also, it wouldn't hurt to add engines like the LAAT.
The front could use some smoothening out, but all you need is 1-2 more pieces there.
And the hangar area could be a tad bit wider, but it's fine where it is now.

Overall, I love it. It has nice angles, (scratch 1) and it's a nice concept. Nice work. Smile

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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Darth Yoda on Tue Nov 25, 2008 3:38 am

Cockpit = win. Seriously it looks very cool. Shocked
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by legorevolution on Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:19 am

Alpha wrote:

Aight. The wings could use some flick-fire missles. Put them in the back of the gunship.
Also, it wouldn't hurt to add engines like the LAAT.
The front could use some smoothening out, but all you need is 1-2 more pieces there.
And the hangar area could be a tad bit wider, but it's fine where it is now.

Overall, I love it. It has nice angles, (scratch 1) and it's a nice concept. Nice work. Smile

Alpha= win minus the pointed front. I like the cockpit and the blue and blank scheme goin on. Make those mods that alpha pointed out and lets see another pic.
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Thunder-blade on Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:22 am

Yeah, I just LOVE my cockpit... I'll make the wings and such...

Does anyone have any ideas of the interior??

And the back... to me it's bleh... ahy ideas there??
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by legorevolution on Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:24 am

Thunder-blade wrote:Yeah, I just LOVE my cockpit... I'll make the wings and such...

Does anyone have any ideas of the interior??

And the back... to me it's bleh... ahy ideas there??

It would be pretty cool if you could have the two 'doors' meet at the top of the gunship so when the ship landed on water or ground the whole side of the ship folded down for the troops to disperse quickly. It's a radical idea but if you could tackle it, it'd be really effing sweet. Shocked
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Axel on Tue Nov 25, 2008 7:39 am

Hmm...it actually has that 'bring it on and I'll ram you' look to it. Looks like a big black and blue whale. For ther interior, why not add a few turrets on the side? For those quick attacks against clankers.
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by 80-0 on Tue Nov 25, 2008 1:39 pm

Pretty nice! Actually, if you added small wings in the frontish and gave it a dish like the HMP has you could make an MAF! Hola Wow!


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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by cln-cmndo on Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:32 pm

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:Pretty nice! Actually, if you added small wings in the frontish and gave it a dish like the HMP has you could make an MAF! Hola Wow!


That is a good idea! Smile
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by flare on Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:44 pm

Thunder-blade wrote:I am not satisfied with this MOC I whipped up in about an hour...





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I am only satisfied with the front, the tri-guns look sweet I must say...

The rest is a tad boxy... and plain...

Any Ideas??

Hmmm.... I would ditch the trans. Red screen and but a black on in because the red sort of clashes with the blue.

Otherwise your doing excellant so far!
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Re: Transport/Gunship WIP

Post by Thunder-blade on Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:36 am

If you have noticed... I have finished this and made it's own topic...

Here.

Thanks for all your comments!!
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