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Castle Comic, Part One

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Castle Comic, Part One

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Feb 24, 2008 9:44 am

I have finsihed my first part of my comic! I used different models from the Bulls/ Lion Line and Crown/ Skeleton castle line, and edited those.

Click here and press 'next'.
The gallery has to be moderated but I think it will be done before you guys read it. Comments welcome!
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by Rook on Sun Feb 24, 2008 1:54 pm

Green Gallery isn't public yet. You'll need to change that for everyone to see it. Green
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:39 pm

And how do I do that? Roll Eyes






I can't...
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by Rook on Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:42 pm

Green I don't have Brickshelf. Sorry. Ask CC007. Maybe he'll know. Or just upload them to the CABG Brickshelf account. Green
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:44 pm

I know how to make them public, thats not the problem. The problem is someone else has to do it... Roll Eyes
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by Comrade Faie on Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:01 pm

I like this when is part 2 up? Fordo Yo!

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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:54 pm

I don't know.. I didn't even take 1 picture of it yet...
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by Rook on Sun Feb 24, 2008 6:52 pm

Green Good start. Is it going to be a comic strip or a story line? Green
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by DarthPineapple on Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:40 pm

I don't really know what you mean, Rook. Embarassed
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by Clonecommando007 on Sun Feb 24, 2008 8:24 pm

It's ok. I think it's more of an action story though.
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by Rook on Sun Feb 24, 2008 11:54 pm

Green Sorry let me rephrase the question. Is it going to be joke with a punch line at the end or are you telling a story. I feels like you're telling a story and when I see comic in the title, I think people are telling joke. I guess that's because I was never into comic books as a kid. I had Lego. Anyways, looking forward to part 2. Green
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by DarthPineapple on Mon Feb 25, 2008 7:53 am

It's going to be a story, about the battle between both sides. I think I make the pictures for part 2 in the weekend, because I'm going to use fire and trans-red bricks for blood, and that takes a lot of time.
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by Rook on Mon Feb 25, 2008 7:45 pm

Green Sounds Cool. Can't wait to see the end or middle or chapter 2 of the story. Green
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by The Jinja Ninja on Tue Feb 26, 2008 7:17 pm

It's alright, I guess. There's just something about the flow of it that puts me off. At the moment, your timing's a little slow. For instance, panels 03, 04 and some of 05 could be merged into one. Some smaller nit-picks:

-The bright white background is a bit distracting; maybe you should use a beige or sand-coloured one. Or even a landscape picture.
-Could you resize the pictures? Sometimes they take a long time to load.
-I think using a photo-editor to turn the individual images into a more comic-book-style layout would be nice - better than clicking 'next' after every panel.

Apart from those technicalities, the actual content is enjoyable, although I hope a more complex storyline develops, rather than "i kill u, this thing goes bash, raarrgh, kaboom!' Wink
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Re: Castle Comic, Part One

Post by DarthPineapple on Wed Feb 27, 2008 5:39 pm

I don't really have a large thing to use as a background. I'm sorry. And I'm also not that good at resizing, or editing pictures. And if I make them a comic book style they would be too small.
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